Punctuation Smunctuation. Can anyone help me?
I tend to struggle a bit with punctuation when writing, especially in dialogue. I just finished the first chapter of a new Twilight fic I'm writing and it's almost 7000 words, definitely the biggest chapter I've ever written. I submitted it to my favorite Twilight fanfic site but it was rejected strictly because of "Punctuation errors in and around dialogue." I was told I'd be welcome to re-submit it after the problems were taken care of. They were very nice about it and I really would love to re-submit it.
Not to toot my own horn, but I feel like it's some decent writing and I was wondering if anyone would be so kind (and have time) to have a look through it before I re-submit. I've corrected everything I can think of, but would love a second opinion. It would help if you were familiar with Twilight, but that's not 100% neccessary, since this is a AU-All human fic.
Can anyone help me out?
Not to toot my own horn, but I feel like it's some decent writing and I was wondering if anyone would be so kind (and have time) to have a look through it before I re-submit. I've corrected everything I can think of, but would love a second opinion. It would help if you were familiar with Twilight, but that's not 100% neccessary, since this is a AU-All human fic.
Can anyone help me out?