Wow. Hardly anyone reading this forum anymore. :( Or maybe this fic is too reminiscent of the set-up in the doujinshi 'lovesick' (which is set after Kantarou returns from an unspecified person's memorial).
Rather than writing about sex, which seems to be the fan obsession and for which I tried to remain ambiguous here, I was trying to give the little guy a fairly normal life (in retrospect)that still included a close relationship with his tengu.
The beginning was meant to sketch out a situation that hasn't happened yet--a possible future in which Kantarou found a woman to love, married her, had a full life with kids who are now grown, and it is now a year after she died sometime in her 40's, leaving Kantarou a widower with adult kids but not quite an old man, maybe 50-ish or so. (For some people 50 is the end of the line, for others it is little more than the half-way mark, so that's a kind of an ambiguous age). Haruka remained present as his friend and family employee (whether ever more than that before the marriage I don't specify). Now he's wondering if Kantarou is done grieving and is ready to be a bachelor again (and whether to be more than friends is again reader's interpretive choice--I don't specify much about that kiss...)
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Rather than writing about sex, which seems to be the fan obsession and for which I tried to remain ambiguous here, I was trying to give the little guy a fairly normal life (in retrospect)that still included a close relationship with his tengu.
"Ai" or "renai" is up to the reader.
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