Title: Spring Will Wait For Us
Fandom: D. Gray-Man
Characters/Pairings: Mostly Lavi and Kanda, with a bit of not-very-explicit Lavi/Kanda smut, and appearances by Allen and Lenalee
Summary: In which it’s two years after the final battle, Lavi rambles to himself in long sentences and Kanda is a bossy know-it-all. But then again, Kanda’s been
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First and most important of all, I love your fic. (And those LaviYuu ones that you wrote ages ago.)
Truth to be told, for a long time, I was supposed to comment on those and tell you how much I loved them, but somehow I never did. How I was supposed to tell you that I adore your writing style and your portrayals of Lavi and Kanda. And how your beautiful style to write in present tense slipped its way to my own Lavi/Kanda fic (which I still claim to be my best writing ever).
I've read over hundred fics of these two, and when I look back, yours were one of the first ones that I adored and loved and read more than once. So much that when I saw your post on community, I recognized your pen name. (And I never remember nicks.)
So, all in all, what I'm trying to say is that I love your writing style, the way it rambles and still brings the characters to live, and I would lie if I said that your Lavi/Yuu fics weren't a huge inspiration when I wrote and struggled with my "Dawn of the night".
So. Thanks. For all of that. (And for this fic too, it was beautiful.)
(End of the ramble.)
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(There's just something about Lavi/Kanda that works so well with present tense, isn't there? Though I'm sure I still have screwy tense changes lurking around that I missed because I always catch a few new ones every time ^^;;)
Haha, this reply is sounding all serious business and stuff because I'm pretty much flailing madly and blushing like Lavi's hair ^\\^ I'm so glad you enjoyed my fics, and thank you so much again for commenting! <333
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Nuu, problems are never fun! Happy you got to read my comment though and even happier it made your day (year?)!
And be honored; you totally deserve it. (And yes there is! I have one (two?) one-shots that are not written in the present tense and as happy as I am with them, it just doesn't fit as well as the present tense. Not with these boys.
And yesh, the tense changes are evil!)
And daww! At least Lavi's hair is cute, no? ;) Again thanks for sharing, hope to get more lovely fics from you! <3 (And if you ever need someone to kick you to write, I'd be happy to do so. xD)
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