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yuku_chun November 28 2015, 23:38:23 UTC
Honestly... I couldn't decide which to read, so I read both.
Ehehe... I'm not into her-fics so sorry about that one but anyway...

This fanfiction made my heart fall and soar, taking turns and I have to admit that I am emotionally spent for the evening. Holy shit.

The emotional atmosphere and sensuality of everything was almost overpowering.
--- before I forget it I have to point out how amazing I think you put all the side characters into the bar and scenes before it was only SuKai ; especially my babies Tao and Amber /screeches ---

I absolutely adored the memory of their first kiss and just everything in that scenery and how I could almost smell the moist air and the wood of the bridge while reading it, - I need to keep myself from cursing again even if it's just for emphasis.

Just like in the story I read before you managed to make me melt into a pool of emotions with only a couple of words:
"Jongin tasted of yesterdays and tomorrows. Jongin tasted of forever." - and I will cry myself to sleep because of that - I'm too emotionally attached again but it was really, really beautiful.

I still think it can't be only my own hyper-sensitivity (that's not even a joke, I'm super empathic which can suck sometimes) that makes me feel so much whenever I read your heart-felt stories - it's how you write them as well.
It's as if you gather up all the emotions and just push them all into the words like my sister uses to try and clean up her room but as soon as someone (me) pokes around the text everything blunders out and buries me alive like clothes falling out of an overstuffed wardrobe.

What I am trying to say is: this was wonderful and you can be really, really proud of your work (generally - really Adele!). <3

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lotusk December 1 2015, 17:47:26 UTC
Thank you so much for this beautiful comment. This is actually one of my favorite fics that I've written so it means a lot to me that you read it and connected with it ;;; their first kiss - I think that's one of the toughest scenes I've written and also one of the best. In the sense of emotionality if nothing else.

Being super-empathic, that sounds fascinating. I hope my fics don't get too much for you tho ;;;

Again, thanks for the support - ILYSM you have no idea. Also, if you left a comment on my holiday meme, thank you! ♡

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yuku_chun December 1 2015, 23:16:09 UTC
It was definitely one of the most breathtaking sceneries I had the pleasure to mentally be part of during the last weeks so I should basically thank you for writing this all the more.

I guess it can be interesting but I had a hard time to accept how much of a 'crybaby' I am because people's emotion or even stories get to me so easily. Especially if I invest myself in them like I do when I read your stories. I really, really enjoy it though so there is no need to worry and if something is too exciting and I start to shake and ache because I tensed up too much I take a break and it gets better again.
Please don't worry too much (though it might be an interesting trope in a story... my mom and granny are like that too and my granny even changes the sidewalk when someone who walks into her direction carries too much aggression or whatever other strong emotion for her to deal with)

As I mentioned on twitter before you and your stories give me so much motivation and just general joy that there is no way I could not support you wholeheartedly. ... and I really need to read your holiday meme - going to do it right now!
When I saw your announcement on twitter I was on my way to university, only had time to like it but then it was out of my head and gone again ;;

(my Internet died during my first try to send the answer so if you recieve the same comment two times now, please delete one of them to avoid the mess I'll probably make OTL)

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