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arabrab47 April 13 2010, 18:03:59 UTC
Perfect. This is just . . . perfect. Everything between Cara pulling away from the kiss and saying "Never to me" and Cara telling Kahlan she won't admit it in broad daylight (which was also perfect and made me smile) just gives me this gut punching, beautifully sad feeling, and it was unexpected but it just fits so well with this episode and these two characters. and the last image? unf. bravo.

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mayireadtoday April 13 2010, 18:55:27 UTC
Beautiful -- from beginning to end.

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belamordsith April 13 2010, 19:08:50 UTC
Perfect fanfic. It's a very sweet, beautiful and painful moment for Cara. Really good.

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random_zombie April 13 2010, 20:05:33 UTC
And deep down, Kahlan knows that the reason for that lingers on her lips; it swirls in her blood and makes the pulse pound low in her belly: It stands, trembling and vulnerable in the moonlight, staring at her with a hunger so great she wonders how she ever confused it with anything else.

Guh. The whole fic is incredibly, painfully beautiful but this and the final line...just guh. Fantastic Desecration follow up. :D

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freakykaethe April 13 2010, 20:09:44 UTC
Oh my god, hear-twrenchingly beautiful, loved it!
You captured the emotions very well and I don't know, I just loved it <3
Going to keep this in my memories :)

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