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The Gift of Stolen Time - Part 10

Jun 27, 2010 22:07

Title: The Gift Of Stolen Time
Author: Dark_Kurai
Pairing: Cara/Kahlan, touches of Cara/Dahlia
Rating: R
Disclaimer: I own nothing.
Spoilers: Should be none, plays after 2x22.
Summary: Follow-up to A Tear, A Word, A Smile - When Zedd opens a magical portal to ease their travels after the victory against the Keeper, something goes wrong that forces Cara ( Read more... )

fanfiction: cara/kahlan, user: dark_kurai

Comments 28

meatisadelicacy June 27 2010, 23:43:06 UTC

What what what!? How...what...okay...Imma go re-read. Did Noa have something to do with the villagers attacking each other, or was it just some sort of powerful magic? I'm so confused! I LOVE IT.

dark_kurai June 30 2010, 17:12:05 UTC

Who knows? I certainly don't, I swear! *hides crossed fingers behind back* But interesting ideas for sure!
Glad I could please ;]

synergyfox June 27 2010, 23:55:00 UTC

Whoa whoa whoa. Did Noa do what my sleep-addled mind think she just did? Did she like... O_o is she a Confessor? Did she go Con Dar on their village asses? o_O *must now re-read as well*

Side-note: Awe... Cara can't resist the pout/cold shoulder

dark_kurai June 30 2010, 17:15:02 UTC

How funky, everyone imagines the Con'Dar :D But I have to admit, Noa is old enough that she could be the kid of one of the dead Confessors...
Even a Mord'Sith can't stand to be ignored!

mayireadtoday June 28 2010, 00:26:23 UTC

Noa is such a little Cara. Who else would want to learn how to use the agiel?

Fers! "The killing of an innocent child was turning into a religious sacrifice to their beloved Goddess."

So beautiful and squishy: "Kahlan's smile reminds me of sunshine after freshly fallen rain. Noa's of the first day of snow. [...] I feel proud and warm when I receive those smiles [...] I feel good when I'm with them. I feel home."

Noa's a confessor? That was the Con Dar, right?

dark_kurai June 30 2010, 17:16:51 UTC

Cara is her total role model. Who wouldn't want to be like her? Noa is her fangirl number one, right next to Kahlan ;]

xam21 June 28 2010, 00:59:55 UTC

I love love love this story! :)
thank you for the lovely update.
I've been thinking about this for quite some time now though, and the insightful comments of meatisadelicacy, synergyfox and mayireadtoday made me remember.(Is it possible that Noa may be Kahlan and Cara's daughter (by some uncanny twist of fate and time)? With the bi-colored eyes, and now the ConDar-esque mystery? Hmm... interesting concept..)

This is a wonderful chapter/installment. I'm looking forward to learn more about Cara and Noa's 2nd year at this AU-verse! :)

-Xam

dark_kurai June 30 2010, 17:21:13 UTC

Thank you for the lovely review!
Well, I certainly wonder how 'that' came to be, but in the end there is always Zedd to blame ;] But I'm just speaking hypothetically here. I'm neither confirming nor denying, as I love how the readers mull over the mysteries *grin*

musicffyou June 28 2010, 01:43:28 UTC

wow you sure know how to leave people with their mouth open in shock.

I can see people have written this theory already so I'm just going to say...Confessor??

I really can't wait for the next chapter. Gosh Noa is just becoming my favorite character. For some reason she reminds me of Kahlan a lot.

Plus the fact that Kahlan and Noa are the two center pieces of her subconscious made me sooo happy :) Oh Cara you love your two girls

dark_kurai June 30 2010, 17:24:43 UTC

Yay, I accomplished my goal! *giggle*
Noa is a lot of fun to write, but it's not easy to put an OC and a Main together, so I had to press my thumbs and hope that Noa did not annoy anyone. Since there is a lot of time they spend together in the fic. But more about that in later parts :]
Cara maaay have become a tiny bit attached... :D