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"Like Chocolate" remix of yueni LOTR RPS

Jul 15, 2006 13:10

Author: feelforfaith
Title: Like Chocolate
Original Story Pants by yueni (or try this archive.org link Pants)
Pairing: Billy/Elijah
Rating: NC17
Summary: "I mean, unbutton, unzip, and slide your jeans to your thighs," Billy said. "Not that complicated, trust me."
Beta: glam_ang

DISCLAIMER: The author makes no claims or inferences to reality or truthfulness. Moreover, this ( Read more... )

Comments 21

almostnever July 16 2006, 02:26:35 UTC

This was just delectable. Mmmm.

feelforfaith July 22 2006, 05:57:04 UTC

Thank you :)

elmathelas July 16 2006, 04:44:13 UTC

Wow. I can't believe that billy took the bet, but you didn't shy away from making him an asshole, but his attempt at redemption reads as believable.

Very hot as well.

feelforfaith July 22 2006, 05:59:09 UTC

I quite enjoyed writing Billy this way :). Thank you.

unstealthy July 16 2006, 14:30:45 UTC

Wonderfully angsty and hot. Brilliant!

feelforfaith July 22 2006, 05:57:26 UTC

Thank you! :)

ex_absolutef238 July 17 2006, 05:58:16 UTC

Elijah's laughter rumbled against his skin. "I think I could let you, since you've already licked my dick...."

i'm not sure why i love that line so much, but i do.

i love this whole story. what a great job. i love all the characterizations. i love the dialogue and the sex is ngh! and the hearts beating and goosepimply skin and getting into hugs are even better.

yes.

feelforfaith July 22 2006, 06:00:18 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so happy you liked it. :D

shaenie July 19 2006, 04:10:33 UTC

ooh, yum!

feelforfaith July 22 2006, 05:57:45 UTC

Thank you :)