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Remix of foxtales: Proof

Jul 19, 2009 07:41

Title: Proof
Author: escribo (Dani)
Original story: Present Day AU, here and here by foxtales
Pairing: Billy/Dom
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Billy wasn't always so blasé about killing.
Warnings: references to violence

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2009 remix

Comments 8

foxtales July 19 2009, 16:22:39 UTC

I don't want to resort to capslock, but I LOVE THIS SO VERY MUCH!

I'll come back later when I have more time for detailed fb, but this is brilliant and I love it and thank you!

escribo July 26 2009, 23:19:07 UTC

Thanks.

foxtales July 27 2009, 00:22:39 UTC

Oh man, I have been remiss in coming back to this, which is a shame on my part and I'm sorry for that. But. Let the fb begin ( ... )

foxrafer July 20 2009, 11:42:57 UTC

This is wonderful. It's a great story of the beginning of Billy and Dom's "career" and I really loved Bernard (as I did in the original). I think it fits with the original fic really well.

escribo July 26 2009, 23:20:00 UTC

Thank you! I rather liked the Bernard character, too, and wanted to know where he came from and how he hooked up with Billy. I'm glad you liked it :D

stormatdusk July 20 2009, 12:11:47 UTC

this has a gritty feel that works really well with the underlying tenderness between dom and billy. thanks for the great read.

escribo July 26 2009, 23:21:12 UTC

Thank you for commenting. I'm really glad it worked for you :D

babydazzle July 28 2009, 17:40:49 UTC

What stood out most to me in this was your Billy. It's not too often that I feel overly mushy and sappy over him, but your description of him looking like a child in his suit was just too sweet for words. Such a nice image.