He of Hope and Despair by Adonnen Estenniel

[alphien]

Author: Adonnen Estenniel (alphien )
Title: "He of Hope and Despair"
Rating: PG
Theme: poem
Elements: adverb - already
Summary: The ever-faith of Gorlim son of Angrim marks the road to doom.
Wordcount: 179

Comments

[kayleelupin]

*shudders* Oh, Adonnen, this is positively creepy. Shuddersome, and all the better for it, because that's no doubt what you meant to convey. Well done!

Kaylee Arafinwiel

[dreamflower02]

Such a sad story, you've captured it so well in your verses!

[blslarner]

Not for naught was he known as the Deceiver! Well wrought!

[foxrafer]

Very atmospheric, sad and kind of creepy as well. Lovely work.