Lost Fic Battle 2010

Jan 18, 2010 09:44

Lost Fic Battle 2010!

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Re: Paperwork and Candy Bars, Daniel/Juliet, office work, PG phelipa January 18 2010, 11:26:11 UTC
This is so sweet.
I love that even though she's been there for a while (although she's 'new'), she still makes him nervous. He does not handle change well.
He's been watching too any rom-coms and bad sit-coms. Hahahaha!
Love it :)

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Re: Paperwork and Candy Bars, Daniel/Juliet, office work, PG colourmayfade January 18 2010, 12:20:58 UTC
This is so sweet! Daniel and Juliet are two characters who I think could have been friends or even more than that, in any situation that wasn't the one in which they met. Two that I think could have been functional, if only their stories weren't so tightly connected to the island. They're fun and light and adorable here! It's really great to read.

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Re: Paperwork and Candy Bars, Daniel/Juliet, office work, PG ozmissage January 18 2010, 18:25:31 UTC
Oh, this is so sweet! Dan's adorable here, so bumbling and wishing he was a detective. I love this AU, Dan/Juliet would have so good together.

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Re: a room made of bad memories, jack/starbuck (lost/bsg), piano, pg-13 ozmissage January 18 2010, 17:41:05 UTC
Guh. This is amazing and Jack/Kara would be pretty epic. I love the imagery you use here, it's all so haunting and gorgeous. Amazing work.

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Re: a room made of bad memories, jack/starbuck (lost/bsg), piano, pg-13 aboutbunnies January 19 2010, 04:16:24 UTC
OMG, you wrote this. Honey, it's incredible. This is so much more than I could have imagined from the prompt. It fits these two so perfectly. Her crooked smile and Jack's confusion and how much time has passed and Is this Earth?. It's amazing. Wow. Thanks for writing it.

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The Carnage of the Fiery Sun, Ben/author's choice (Sun), fear well, my one and only, PG-13 isis2015 January 18 2010, 12:00:09 UTC
Sun sits across the room in a chair when they're done, while Ben is still lying in the bed staring at the ceiling. She does it because she can't bear to have him touch her any more. Her skin prickles at the thought of it.

She wishes she had alcohol to blame this on. At least then she would be able to make sense of it. But there is no sense to be made here.

"I love you, you know," he says. Only he could take beautiful words and turn them into something taunting and cruel.

She pulls at strands of her long hair so she has something to look at - something other than him. "I know," she answers. It turns her stomach more than the sex; the love. Sex can be disconnected. It can be about anything, anyone, but love...she had once thought Ben incapable of such a thing. She has suffered for his love for her enough now to know that he can in fact feel love. And it makes him do horrible things. Especially to her.

"Come back to bed," he says, without looking at her.

She grinds her jaw. "No," she tells him. Simply, frankly, firmly. NoA long ( ... )

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Re: The Carnage of the Fiery Sun, Ben/author's choice (Sun), fear well, my one and only, PG-13 isis2015 January 19 2010, 02:29:45 UTC
Love and Ben really is not a good combination.

Indeed it is not.

I would never have considered this pairing at all if it weren't for the fact that I wrote a big, multi-chaptered Ben/Sun fic over the last six months and the whole messed-up idea of it is just stuck in my brain.

I'm glad you liked it, thanks. :)

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Re: The Carnage of the Fiery Sun, Ben/author's choice (Sun), fear well, my one and only, PG-13 flaky_artist January 18 2010, 19:32:33 UTC
Never would have considered this pairing, but I think you really made it work here.

"Stop loving me," she tells him.
"No," he replies.

Love it!

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once in a while comes and it fades away. don/juliet (mad men/lost), you're not my first, pg13 colourmayfade January 18 2010, 12:09:00 UTC
Every once in a while he comes in the afternoon. Knocks on her door and Juliet lets him in, indulges him with a smile that says she wasn't doing anything. On those days, he smells worse than usual; she leaves the window open, but the smoke clings - not just to his clothes, to himHe beckons her back to bed with an extended hand, lights up a cigarette and offers it to her though he knows she won't take it. Juliet melts into the sheets gladly, tells him with a serious face: "I heard that smoking kills, you know ( ... )

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Re: once in a while comes and it fades away. don/juliet (mad men/lost), you're not my first, pg13 ozmissage January 18 2010, 18:45:53 UTC
So. Freaking. Brilliant.

If Juliet magically landed in the 60s and met Don this is exactly what would happen.

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Re: once in a while comes and it fades away. don/juliet (mad men/lost), you're not my first, pg13 colourmayfade January 19 2010, 00:43:25 UTC
♥ thank you!

lol, it wouldn't even have to be that magic - the island only missed the sixties by a few years! Maybe it's because they're my crack pairing of choice atm, but it seems completely possible to me!

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Re: Our Endless Numbered Days, Alex/Richard, cavern, PG-13 (Part 2) crickets January 18 2010, 16:21:28 UTC
Oh, I love the way you've written Richard here. Very dark but very poetic too. I love that last line. And this: Pretending helped, helped him feel less ancient.

Well done!

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Re: Our Endless Numbered Days, Alex/Richard, cavern, PG-13 (Part 2) gigglemonster January 19 2010, 04:55:48 UTC
This is fabulous. I love the darker, harder edge you've given Richard here. I feel like if everything we know and think about him (the agelessness, the immortality) is true, then this seems like a very plausible outcome for him. Very awesome, thank you for providing so much wonderful fic about him :)

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