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[zelda_zee]

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Comments

Re: ricochet, chisel / Eloise, Richard (Charles/Eloise) - pg-13

[missy_useless]

Oh my ... woah! This is amazing; I adore you so much for taking these (pretty difficult) prompts and turning them into something so ... perfect. I love your Eloise voice so much, and oh my God, Richard! I don't have words. This feels very in-character (despite the fact that we know so little about them). It is ingenious and wonderful.

Re: ricochet, chisel / Eloise, Richard (Charles/Eloise) - pg-13

[janie_tangerine]

Girl, you made me care for Eloise. It means you can do anything. You even made me care for Charlie/Eloise and I was seriously so sad for her here, you completely nailed it. Great use of the prompts there, I really loved it. That was outstanding, wow. And your Richard is so good.

Re: ricochet, chisel / Eloise, Richard (Charles/Eloise) - pg-13

[valhalla37]

So incredible -- I love the tangled relationships between everyone here, both present and not; everything is so in-character and fleshed-out and creates this whole new dimension to what's happening.

And this -- she felt the baby kick, hard, already angry at her. Wow. What a line.

Eloise is such a great character, and you write her so fantastically here -- great work!

Re: ricochet, chisel / Eloise, Richard (Charles/Eloise) - pg-13

[phelipa]

Oh, wow.
The last three paragraphs were absolutely fantastic - I love that he opens up to her just a little but and they're able to be 'themselves' around each other. This is just perfect.

Re: ricochet, chisel / Eloise, Richard (Charles/Eloise) - pg-13

[elliotsmelliot]

You establish the characters, their odd society, and their twisted lives so well with this short passage. I just loved this. I want to see more.

Re: ricochet, chisel / Eloise, Richard (Charles/Eloise) - pg-13

[angela_weber]

This is so gorgeously and deftly written. I love your Richard! And I adore the complex and interconnected and subtle way in which you've sketched these relationships: they feel so real and so true to canon, even though this area of canon is so much a mystery to us! I am really and truly in awe.