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[zelda_zee]

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Comments

balloon, madman (Juliet, Ben) pg

[gealbhan_beag]

Went pretty far back in the episodes for this one. It takes place sometime Season 1/Season 2-ish, chronologically. From what I can remember and from what Lostpedia tells me, we don't know what actually happened to Henry Gale -- Juliet doesn't either, but I felt like exploring what she might have wondered about, if she'd known

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[phelipa]

Really, really well done.
I loved the paragraph about Juliet discovering the balloon and agree with Lenina, the last line is fabulous. I also liked that you worked one of the pregnant women into the story, great job :D

Re: balloon, madman (Juliet, Ben) pg

[zelda_zee]

Very nice! I particularly liked how much of a presence the island itself is in this piece.

Re: balloon, madman (Juliet, Ben) pg

[elliotsmelliot]

This was really interesting! Well done with the prompt, and all the details about the balloon crash. It had great atmosphere.

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[eponine119]

What a great idea and detail to explore! Very well done.