Comments | lostsquee: For Queen mystic

amazingly_me in lostsquee

For Queen mystic_xf

Aug 21, 2007 19:55

Oh my Queen, I bring Hurley, riding in in the Luau Van of Much Squee, to bring you camera!fic. And hopefully to cheer you up. :]

Title: Say Cheese
Rating: PG. Tops.
Characters/Pairings: Most of the main cast, in one way or another. Gen.
Summary: Hurley takes a picture just before rescue.
Spoilers/Warnings: I took into account the Season 3 Finale ( Read more... )

luau 2007: fic, luau 2007

Comments 22

eponine119 August 22 2007, 04:43:43 UTC

Awwww! I love this. It's making me smile and I kinda want to give it a big old hug.

amazingly_me August 22 2007, 07:08:00 UTC

:] i'm glad. heehee. people are always welcome to hug my fic. :P

really though, i'm glad it made you smile. :]

elise_509 August 22 2007, 05:08:25 UTC

I love this! So much is told in just this simple posing for the photograph, from how Sun and Jin touch each other to how Kate reaches for Jack's hand and eventually finds it, to Jack and Sawyer finally putting their arms around each other. I especially liked what everyone says when they're waiting for the flash to go off. It was all so perfect, Claire saying Charlie and Jack counting to five and Kate counting down from five. Sawyer's last comment to them both was priceless.

*loves*

amazingly_me August 22 2007, 07:09:26 UTC

thanks! i'm glad. :]

i love to write about photographs (it's been a project in the back of my mind lately, actually), so i'm really glad the description of the posing worked.

i just felt like if I could think of the right thing for Sawyer to say, it could almost sum up the whole thing. :P so i'm glad you liked it. :]

yay! ;]

mysticxf August 22 2007, 12:40:18 UTC

The Jack/Kate hand thing kept making me smirk, and all the little things going on -- the personal stuff -- made me giggle... and I dunno, the "hatch!" made me almost LOL because its' SO random, but SO perfect!!

*hugs* Thank you.

amazingly_me January 12 2008, 02:45:20 UTC

So-o...I just realized I hadn't replied to these comments. :[

Thank you so much, and I'm glad you liked it! I love comments. Honest. EVEN WHEN I AM A BAD, BAD...COMMENT-REPLIER? IS THERE A WORD FOR THIS? AM I STUCK IN CAPSLOCK?

alemyrddin August 22 2007, 17:33:31 UTC

so... I started laughing and ended moved... very, very good!
my two favourite moments? jack and Sawyer putting their arms around each other's shoulders (no surprise here!) but also Sawyer's last line...
very good!
:)

amazingly_me January 12 2008, 02:46:27 UTC

As I mentioned above (and will mention many times afterwards -- why am I so bad about this?!) I didn't realize I hadn't replied to these! :[ I'm really sorry for the late reply.

I'm really glad you liked Sawyer's interactions/line, because I'm never sure about writing him. It's hard for me to get him right.

Thanks for the feedback! :]

siluria August 22 2007, 18:02:25 UTC

Cute, I love the comment about the photo signifying the end - very true. And Sawyer's last comment rules :)

amazingly_me January 12 2008, 02:47:26 UTC

I'm so sorry -- I didn't realize I hadn't replied to these comments! I know it's been a horrendously long amount of time, but...sorry? :[

It always makes me all sad to think about them going their separate ways -- I'm glad the photo's significance worked though. And thank you!

Thanks for the comment. :]

siluria January 13 2008, 13:54:53 UTC

Hey don't worry about it! At least I got a second read trying to work out what I'd replied to :D