rap? fuck that, this is hip hop

Aug 30, 2006 17:29

well, loving music and getting bored of guitar without a band is a bad combo... so i decided to deal with it this summer by beginning to write rhymes... this is the result of yesterdays lyrical adventure... hit me with any criticisms...

(ps. this is meant to be funny, i don't condone unnecessary fighting or drunk driving in any way.)

Heavy on my mind 'cause I do it all the time.
You know, I drink enough to make your girl look like a dime.
Fightin' like Tyson, I'm dodgin' and bitin'.
Duckin' and weavin' the three of you I'm seein'.
Your girl gives me a hug as I'm walkin' out the pub.
I'll be seein' her tonight, but don't worry, this ain't love.
Through blurrier vision, I'm makin' bad decisions.
Swervin' through the streets causin' multiple collisions.
Deep in religions, I stick with traditions.
Fuck a porcelain god, I can handle what I'm given.

i don't know, i had fun writing it... i hope you had fun reading it...
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