Fic: Refraction, by ltlj Part 2 of 2

[ltlj]

Title: Refraction, Part 2 of 2

Comments

[wickedwords]

Oh, this was terrific! Terrifying and intense, with a well-constructed plot. I love how you incorporated the goa'uld into this, and the extrapolations that you made. Plus I adore you for including the bits about how starved atlantis is for someone, anyone with the ata gene. That little bit made me very happy. Oh, my. There were so many little details I loved, from the way not!rodney acted to the changes in Sheppard to the way the personnel in goa'uld acted that I just loved. Thanks.

[ltlj]

Thanks very much for the comments! Glad you enjoyed it.

[ekaterinn]

Oh, I really enjoyed this. The other Atlantis and the vulnerability and bitchiness of the other McKay. It's really well-written and very creepy and a bit sad.

[ltlj]

Thanks very much!

[kiranovember]

This is terrific! I suspected when Rodney saw a bracelet on Weir that she was goa'uld, but your idea that Atlantis wouldn't respond to someone with the gene who was also jaffa was good

[ltlj]

Thanks, glad you liked it! And thanks also for letting me know what lines you particularly liked.