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Sawyer/Juliet Fan Fic: Free To Stay

Jun 21, 2009 17:54

Title: Free To Stay - Chapter 3
Rating: PG
Author's Note: Thank you for the reviews! I love hearing feedback and you guys are simply wonderful. I know I have the tendency to switch tenses; I tried to fix that this time. I’ll probably make it a few more chapters, more or less-I guess we’ll see where I take this lol. Enjoy.

( “Look man, we survived lethal flashes, somehow teleported 30 years into the past, and you two can’t even decide if you like or hate each other.” )

fan fic

Comments 6

cantbesilent June 22 2009, 01:26:24 UTC

Nice job! Love your insight into Miles. He's never done too much for me, although I liked him more throughout this past season, but I enjoyed what you did here. A pleasant read, keep them coming!

reverie_405 July 13 2009, 23:21:50 UTC

yeah i wasn't too keen on miles at first but he's one of those characters that just grew on me

thanks and i'll try my best :]

wtfsignmeup2 June 22 2009, 04:05:44 UTC

Love your writing style and I'm really enjoying the story.

op_de_radio June 22 2009, 05:36:55 UTC

I loved that you added that bit with Miles. :D
Lovely chapter. I can't wait to see what will happen next. :]

afishwithawish June 22 2009, 11:43:12 UTC

Lovely chapter!!! I really liked the Miles' insight!! :D Your writing is great! Keep it up!

jesterlady June 22 2009, 19:59:57 UTC

Very good Miles. I'm glad they're a bit calmer now and can get to the real loving soon!