For the bugs_n_slime ficathon

Feb 09, 2008 20:14

Angie at Dawn (Just Like Nicky Hopkins)
by lostakasha
Jack/Angela
PG-13
Not mine.
Beta by sweptawaybayou.
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Don't get the title reference? Google is your friend.

Prompt: The people with money and guns will do what they want and everyone else will pay until the whole world blows up or burns out or whatever. - Anne Fleming (The ( Read more... )

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ohhbuildings February 10 2008, 01:48:58 UTC
lostakasha February 11 2008, 14:03:07 UTC
Thanks for the kind feedback! I'm glad that you read and enjoyed this.

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callieach February 10 2008, 03:05:50 UTC
I'm pretty sure I fucking love you right now.

Seriously - your image of Jack, post-Aliens in a Spaceship emotions, Jack/Angela, and a piano (I'm imagining that it's one of those baby grands that makes my knees go weak)?! Get out your defibrilator, baby, because I think my heart just stopped beating.

You never let me down when you write on a prompt, and I love that. This was truely amazing. ♥

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lostakasha February 11 2008, 14:05:15 UTC
Ooh, baby, I'll do anything to be loved! :D And the piano is actually a grand piano -- a concert-style Steinway. In my personal fanon it was what he learned his lessons on as a child.

Thank you so much.... I really am so excited that you liked this so much. And anytime I can write Jack is heaven!

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buffyangellvr23 February 10 2008, 04:18:07 UTC
oooh very nice :)

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lostakasha February 11 2008, 14:06:55 UTC
Thank you!

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a2zmom February 10 2008, 05:05:25 UTC
Oh, this is so gorgeous.

I never thought of it, but of course Jack is one of those people whose brain is forever running full speed. And after a near death experience, he needs to turn it off but can't.

I love that Angela still doesn't tell Jack her secret. She's not quite ready to share that yet.

Patchouli oil and dying roses, Chandrika soap, the slightest tang of seaweed, and there are mermaids pulling her through abalone chambers, silvery and pearlescent, tempting, conspiring, whispering…

so very sensual.

I have no idea if anyone else will get the title, but I have always loved the "other" Stone's beautiful and evocative piano work.

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lostakasha February 11 2008, 14:13:51 UTC
Thanks so much, R.

It funny, but I went off on this total research binge for this fic about Billy Gibbons, and it occurred to me that the likelyhood of his knowing the Stones is pretty good -- Hopkins, too. Did you know that Hendrix gave him one of his guitars because it was 'too pretty to burn'? Nifty. And that he has warehouses overflowing with his African art collections?

I threw in a reference I wondered if you'd get -- Angela's real name! After Swett Lorraine's Jazz Bar in NOLA, and Irma Thomas. I had *so much* fun with this one.

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a2zmom February 13 2008, 02:26:47 UTC
I did not know that Hendrix story. So cool - sad also, because better to burn a guitar than oneself.

I did know Sweet Lorraine, but not Irma Thomas. My blues knowledge isn't that extensive; it's something I have to work on.

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damnskippytoo February 10 2008, 05:38:52 UTC
Beautiful as always. You put everything you are into every fic no matter what the pairing.

A twinge of pain shoots through his shin as he shifts and drags his useless leg over the side of the bed ( ... )

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lostakasha February 11 2008, 14:15:25 UTC
Thanks, Deb. I enjoyed writing this, and if I hadn't stopped myself it would have been a multi-chapter deal. I'm just fascinated by Jack and Angela -- not necessarily together, but their backgrounds and inner lives. *smooch*

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