Fic: April Shower (S&S)

Oct 26, 2015 14:01

Title: April Shower
Author: lost_spook
Rating: All ages
Word Count: 1025
Characters/Pairings: Silver, Sapphire, Steel
Notes/Warnings: None.
Summary: Silver’s having trouble with a telegraph pole and a dead human - he’s not sure which is the most stubborn.

For justice_turtle in the 500 Prompts Meme: 365 - I walk out in stormy weather (Sapphire/Silver/Steel). Another fic ( Read more... )

fannish scribbles, sapphire, silver, sapphire and steel, steel, 500 prompts

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persiflage_1 October 26 2015, 14:21:08 UTC
Aw, cute! :D

Couple of beta-readerly comments (since I've my proofing hat on extra hard today!):

Tweak the wiring, banished the unwanted signal from two years ago, that’s all they’d seemed to think it would need.

banish not banished...

Silver focus on his task and tried not to be too scared.

focused not focus...

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lost_spook October 26 2015, 14:33:06 UTC
Thank you!

(And thank you muchly for the beta-ing! It's fixed now! ♥ /o\)

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persiflage_1 October 26 2015, 14:38:56 UTC
Welcome!

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ride_4ever October 26 2015, 15:02:55 UTC
Excellent fic! Great scene-setting -- I could see it vividly.

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lost_spook October 26 2015, 17:03:10 UTC
Aw, thank you! :-)

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astrogirl2 October 26 2015, 22:14:37 UTC
This is rather wonderful. I do love how could you are at that odd quality that S&S has, that complete mysteriousness oddity that makes you think it might actually make perfect, if bizarre sense if only we weren't limited human us. :)

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lost_spook October 27 2015, 12:41:45 UTC
Aw, thank you! I'm, er, not sure what it says about me that the weirdness of S&S just feels like such a natural, fun thing to write... :loL:

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dbskyler October 27 2015, 00:49:40 UTC
I really enjoyed that!

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lost_spook October 27 2015, 12:41:59 UTC
Oh, thank you! :-)

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liadtbunny October 27 2015, 16:29:20 UTC
Aw, a happy ending<3

And I have an appropriate icon!

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lost_spook October 27 2015, 17:40:41 UTC
Thank you!

So you do. :-)

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