fic: Lost Moon, J/E

[lost_in_azkaban]

Title: Lost Moon
Fandom/Pairing: Pirates of the Caribbean; Jack/Elizabeth
Rating: Harmless angst
Summary: Immortality takes its toll. Jack and Elizabeth have found the Fountain of Youth and now they must learn to live with their choice and all the things that come with living forever young. Post-AWE...waaaay Post.
A/N: For im_nyoo_nyeaf who gave me the will to

Comments

[geekmama]

“Don’t you ever wonder about us? Maybe we made the wrong choice. Maybe this is our punishment for immortality.” She pulls back, her gaze fierce with indignation.

She has a point, maybe.

A beautiful, heartbreaking, heart-healing scene.

[lost_in_azkaban]

Thank you! *clings*

[chanteur_dombre]

OMG.

YOU KNOW MY REACTION ALREADY.

Keyboard mashing aside, I seriously loved this. Bittersweet. And, MY beach. *hugs*

[whensheflies]

Next time, we're making you take the hike with us. DAMNED SPIKY BUSHES!

Thank you. Steampunky pirates, someday bb!

[chanteur_dombre]

Next time I won't have broken feet! XD

Steampunk is my hidden love. Srsly. Get onto that.

[whensheflies]

Thanks so much!! *clings* I have to catch up on your fic. I'm so behind!

[fried_flamingo]

This was a really poignant way to explore the concept of them having to watch their descendants die, even the ones who don't know who Jack and Elizabeth are.

Elizabeth’s dark eyes hold eternity’s sorrow in their depths, something Jack learned he could no longer fix.

That line was my favourite. You express their pain so well. I'm not sure I could endure it.

Lovely work.

[whensheflies]

*hugs* Thank you so much! I don't know why I do pain so well. I'm afraid people will get sick of the angst!

[pearlseed]

Sweet and sad, a little softness thrown in--very interesting take--I can believe they still feel passion for one another even after all these years--hard hard hard to lose a child.

"Elizabeth’s dark eyes hold eternity’s sorrow in their depths, something Jack learned he could no longer fix." That would have broken his heart. Pretty pretty line.

[whensheflies]

Thanks for reading!
♥!!