Fic - Oil Slick

[ultharkitty]

Title: Oil Slick
Continuity: G1 cartoon AU
Rating: PG-13
Content Advice: unnamed background human OCs in mortal peril, light violence, environmental disaster, implied slash, first person POV in section 1
Disclaimer: characters not mine, just playing in the sandbox.
Characters and or pairings: Blast Off, Vortex, Blades, and a supporting cast of

Comments

[naboru_narluin]

You know, I already squee~ed so much about this fic, and I love all of it, but the first part, Blast Off’s fight log, is still so awesome! I could read it over and over again!
The first paragraph is so wonderful already… *squee*

[…] the staticky crackle that always seemed to develop when Vortex got his instruments wet.

Oh, and this line. I haven’t mentioned it before, I guess, but somehow I really like that insight into the technical issue. :)

And yep, I’m feeling just a little like a stalker. *rofl*

[ultharkitty]

We have a recursive cycle of squee! :D

Pff :P *flying tackle glomp*

Massive thanks, you rock! :D

[naboru_narluin]

*lol* A vicious cycle of escalating squee. :p

*Unff* *hehe*

Thank you, that you write these things. *hrhr*

[caiusmajor]

Oh, Blast Off. Why do you even try? I would offer him hugs, but I don't think he'd like that even if I wasn't an organic.

And yay shiny new Autobot 'copter! (Wonder if he did the same to Springer?)

Everyone is...really kind of adorable, here, even when Vortex is being creepy and kind of terrifying. And poor incompetent Brawl (...and Octane, who has to put up with him, too, although it's Octane: he probably deserves it).

[ultharkitty]

lol!

(Springer-kink coming up ;) )

Thankyou! :D

(Octane totally deserves it. I feel sorry for Brawl.)

[kyra_neko_rei]

*perks up* Springer-kink?

[ultharkitty]

It'll take a while, but I've got Springer!kink going on for Caia, and I'm writing a darker thing with Springer and Vortex for Ayngel. I just need to get a handle on Springer's characterisation first.

[peacewish]

It seems you've been delving more deeply into Blast Off's character of late, and I'm enjoying the result. He's becoming more and more interesting, not to mention entertaining, particularly in regards to his long-suffering martyrdom when it comes to being partnered with someone like Vortex. His perspective on this story, even though he arguably had the least amount of action, was well done

[ultharkitty]

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it :D And so very glad you like what I've done with Blast Off. He's a hell of a lot of fun to write

[mustardwketchup]

*peeks in*

Why hallo thar! XD Sorry to pop into this thread, but I just wanted to say that this story was awesome! I love your Blade's characterization... in your face, with a little naughty streak at the end. :)

I'm looking forward to your Vortex/First Aid bit, and Blade's response to that. XD

Sorry if I was really out of the blue!

[ultharkitty]

Hi! :D

Thankyou! Really glad you like what I've done with Blades :D

And thankyou for the encouragement too!

(out of the blue comments are awesome :D)

[playswithworms]

Really enjoyed this, and absolutely rolling, reading Blast Off's flight log XD

//Blast Off to Vortex. Go help Brawl. And by help, I mean 'offer assistance to facilitate the speedy and successful conclusion of this mission', not 'throw him in the Pacific'.//
XD
He knows his teammate well!

...it was only a partially melted interface cable, it can’t have hurt that much.
Aside from being absolutely hilarious, that line manages to explain so much about Vortex.

Protectobot fluff! My happiness is complete :D

[ultharkitty]

Thankyou! :D

*has so much squee*

I'm really glad it entertained you :D And the Protectobot fluff too! There can never be too much Protectobot fluff ;) (Blades and First Aid are just too adorable)

[kyra_neko_rei]

*purrs at* This was delightful. I agree with you that noncon doesn't fit here, and I'm glad you didn't put it in 'cause I enjoyed reading this, and I wouldn't have.

LOVING the line //Blast Off to Vortex. Go help Brawl. And by help, I mean 'offer assistance to facilitate the speedy and successful conclusion of this mission', not 'throw him in the Pacific'.// It's just so perfect for what it says about both Blast off and Vortex.

Also, adoring Vortex's "hey, why not grope the enemy?" attitude---it's my favorite concept in this fandom and there isn't enough of it.

Only thing that would've improved this fic would be not stopping at "Why don't I get you dirty."

[ultharkitty]

rofl! More Blades/First Aid you say? I can do that ;) (and as for 'hey, why not grope the enemy?', there'll certainly be more of that!)

Thankyou! I'm glad you enjoyed it :D (and squee, I love that icon!)

(oops, managed to comment with my IC journal there *facepalm*)

[kyra_neko_rei]

I approve of commentary from IC journals. Especially if they're IC. ^_^

(is this IC journal part of a certain community with rules about this sort of thing, or can I friend him?) (and will he hunt me down and step on me if I friend him?)

[ultharkitty]

Alas, twitchy_rotors doesn't have any content right now. I'm using it to post over on tf_ic_prompts (and to keep a fandom-only reading list), but I'll be copying over Vortex's crazy ramblings soon, and probably the prose style smutlogs too :P Just need the time to hunt everything down!

(There are no rules about friending. And he'll only hunt you down and step on you if he thinks you'll make an interesting noise :P)