Title: Oil Slick
Continuity: G1 cartoon AU
Rating: PG-13
Content Advice: unnamed background human OCs in mortal peril, light violence, environmental disaster, implied slash, first person POV in section 1
Disclaimer: characters not mine, just playing in the sandbox.
Characters and or pairings: Blast Off, Vortex, Blades, and a supporting cast of
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The first paragraph is so wonderful already… *squee*
[…] the staticky crackle that always seemed to develop when Vortex got his instruments wet.
Oh, and this line. I haven’t mentioned it before, I guess, but somehow I really like that insight into the technical issue. :)
And yep, I’m feeling just a little like a stalker. *rofl*
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Pff :P *flying tackle glomp*
Massive thanks, you rock! :D
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*Unff* *hehe*
Thank you, that you write these things. *hrhr*
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And yay shiny new Autobot 'copter! (Wonder if he did the same to Springer?)
Everyone is...really kind of adorable, here, even when Vortex is being creepy and kind of terrifying. And poor incompetent Brawl (...and Octane, who has to put up with him, too, although it's Octane: he probably deserves it).
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(Springer-kink coming up ;) )
Thankyou! :D
(Octane totally deserves it. I feel sorry for Brawl.)
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Why hallo thar! XD Sorry to pop into this thread, but I just wanted to say that this story was awesome! I love your Blade's characterization... in your face, with a little naughty streak at the end. :)
I'm looking forward to your Vortex/First Aid bit, and Blade's response to that. XD
Sorry if I was really out of the blue!
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Thankyou! Really glad you like what I've done with Blades :D
And thankyou for the encouragement too!
(out of the blue comments are awesome :D)
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//Blast Off to Vortex. Go help Brawl. And by help, I mean 'offer assistance to facilitate the speedy and successful conclusion of this mission', not 'throw him in the Pacific'.//
XD
He knows his teammate well!
...it was only a partially melted interface cable, it can’t have hurt that much.
Aside from being absolutely hilarious, that line manages to explain so much about Vortex.
Protectobot fluff! My happiness is complete :D
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*has so much squee*
I'm really glad it entertained you :D And the Protectobot fluff too! There can never be too much Protectobot fluff ;) (Blades and First Aid are just too adorable)
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LOVING the line //Blast Off to Vortex. Go help Brawl. And by help, I mean 'offer assistance to facilitate the speedy and successful conclusion of this mission', not 'throw him in the Pacific'.// It's just so perfect for what it says about both Blast off and Vortex.
Also, adoring Vortex's "hey, why not grope the enemy?" attitude---it's my favorite concept in this fandom and there isn't enough of it.
Only thing that would've improved this fic would be not stopping at "Why don't I get you dirty."
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Thankyou! I'm glad you enjoyed it :D (and squee, I love that icon!)
(oops, managed to comment with my IC journal there *facepalm*)
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(is this IC journal part of a certain community with rules about this sort of thing, or can I friend him?) (and will he hunt me down and step on me if I friend him?)
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(There are no rules about friending. And he'll only hunt you down and step on you if he thinks you'll make an interesting noise :P)
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