Fic - Recall, Chapter 4

[ultharkitty]

Title: Recall, Chapter 4
Continuity: G1, Dysfunction AU
Rating: NC-17
Content advice: abduction, non-con, manipulation of various kinds including sexual, graphic violence, dark themes, bondage
Beta: naboru_narluin
Disclaimer: Just playing in the sandbox, characters not mine.
Characters: Vortex, First Aid, Stunticon ensemble
Summary: In which the guests leave

Comments

[spacehussy]

WHERE TO EVEN BEGIN <333333

I know I've said this before but I love how smoothly this transitions from being really funny and kind of cute (albeit in a dark way) to ... well, rape! Just - ffffffffff, Vortex saying "my" Autobot, and like what Swindleslog said earlier, First Aid is not an individual, he's a possession. It's so wrong and I enjoy it a lot :D

“He’s here.” Wildrider lifted First Aid’s arm and waggled his fingers. “Look, he’s waving.”

... I laughed. Then felt really bad, especially over the idea of First Aid getting drunk in the hopes he'll forget. The bit about "is that an invitation" outright gave me chills. Not to mention, I really like how when Vortex finally starts to touch him, the gentleness is the cruelest part. Pretty much everything Vortex says to First Aid is INSANELY HOT to me so I won't bother c/ping all of it but this, oh:

“Because,” Vortex said, “You’re perfect. I was so right about you.”

GUH. And then asking First Aid to fix his rotors, and opening up about sensory deprivation, almost conversationally? gfjkhgjkshg. ALL MY LOVE. <3

[ultharkitty]

If I grinned any wider, the top of my head might fall off. So pleased that this part works for you! (which gives me hope for the rest of part 1 :P)

when Vortex finally starts to touch him, the gentleness is the cruelest part And damn, but I am SO happy that this stuck out :D And the dialogue too. As I said above, that took so long to figure out.

Trust Vortex to wear the key to breaking him so very openly. :D