Fic - On the Desk

[ultharkitty]

Title: On the desk
Continuity: G1
Rating: PG-13
Content advice: crack, implied violence, interrogation setting, Vortex traumatizing Wheelie, slashy, and non-explicit talk of smut.
Disclaimer: Not mine, just playing in the sandbox.
Characters and/or pairings: Vortex/Brawl, Wheelie
Summary: A very silly story in which Brawl finds it hard to say what

Comments

[evvj]

-gigglefit-
The fact that I do like Vortex and don't like Wheelie made this fic all the more enjoyable, which probably makes me an awful person, but I don't care.

[ultharkitty]

lol, I'm glad it entertained you!

And I don't think it makes you an awful person; Wheelie was annoying (and V's going to let him go, eventually).

[death_hendry]

I second that sentiment, except i dont feel like an aweful person, because Wheelie i san aweful character XD

[ultharkitty]

lol! :D

And thankyou, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

[ultharkitty]

Yay! And thankyou :D I'm really glad you like that.

You're only the second person to express any sympathy for Wheelie, btw ;) (which either means the rest of us are evil, or that giving a character rhyming dialogue does not endear him to the fanbase :P)

[ultharkitty]

There is that! But when he 'escapes' he'll have the most awesome story to tell (time to attempt to upstage Kup, perhaps? ;) )

[minibot_love]

Lawl Brawl. Clearly the concept of 'work before pleasure' means nothing to him.

;A; Wheeeeliiiiieeeee *snatches up her precious little bot and snuggles him*

Why's everyone gotta pick on him... He's not that bad... I always liked the rhyming...

Plus, nobody rags on Blaster for the fact that he started rhyming, constantly, in season 3...

[ultharkitty]

Thanks for reading, I'm glad Brawl entertained :D

(as for Blaster, I kinda already went there in one of the Grimlock fics. Never done anything nasty with Wheelie before though)

[death_hendry]

BlasterxGrimlock? WHERE IS THIS MAGIC?

[ultharkitty]

lol, alas not BlasterxGrimlock. Just a few lines in a fic where Grimlock comments on Blaster's new tendency towards rhyming.

[ultharkitty]

lol, nope :P

(and to be honest, when the options are a) be bored and horny, and b) crash Vortex's interrogation in the hope of getting some... Actally no, Brawl doesn't seem all that rational after all... :P)

[kyra_neko_rei]

Oh Primus.

I probably shouldn't be running an internal monologue mocking Wheelie's performance under pressure, as while it's so easy to think I'd do so much better, I probably wouldn't.

Vortex does creepy so very, very well though.

[ultharkitty]

:D

Snarking Wheelie is a public service.

I'm really glad Vortex comes across as nicely creepy in this. I've been thinking recently that I don't write him actually being creepy often enough.

[kyra_neko_rei]

Hmmm. Well, I'm a complete wuss about that sort of thing and tend to prefer less actual creepy, but whatever works. (The legit-going-to-be-creepy-or-engaged-in-being-creepy, with full creepiness unattained because the Autobots show up and ruin it, is generally a good compromise. This is perhaps bonus creepy because the Autobot in question is alive to remember things.)

I've got one partly written in which he's coaxed to play (still very kinky) Good Cop due to a combination of getting laid and oooh shiny pretty interesting toy with the positive feedback for it, and it was going to be straight-up unrepentent fluff except an idea for an epilogue changes the whole dynamic and adds creepy factor; when it first popped up I was rather distressed at the concept but now I think I might do it.

(And I'm apparently a total tease. Sorry.)

[ultharkitty]

I shall keep that in mind :D I adore very dark darkfic, but I do like fics where Vortex gets thwarted as well. And where the creepy in more implied than fully described.

Oooh, now that's intriguing :D Vortex playing Good Cop sounds highly entertaining. I hope you can write it in a way which doesn't cause it to be disturbing for you, though.

(No need to be sorry! I'm happy to be teased with hints of not-yet-completed awesome fics :D Especially copter-related ones. )