Fic - Something to Live For, Chapter 3 of 14

Sep 09, 2010 22:08

Title: Something to live for
Chapter 3: Briefing
Continuity: G1, Dysfunction AU
Rating: This chapter: PG-13
Warnings: implied past non-con, implied violence.
Disclaimer: Just playing in the sandbox, characters not mine.
Characters and/or pairings: Starscream, Onslaught, Blast Off, Brawl and Swindle, Optimus and Prowl.
Beta: naboru_narluin.
Summary: In which ( Read more... )

au: dysfunction, swindle, vortex, onslaught, starscream, brawl, blast off, prowl, series: twister, optimus

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onyx17 September 9 2010, 21:37:39 UTC
Hmmm... You do realise your writings are slowly turning me into a Combaticon fangirl yes? =|
Just... the way you do their interactions 8D Priceless! And Swindle's typical weaselling was particularly enterataining in this one XD

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ultharkitty September 9 2010, 21:50:28 UTC
I didn't, but I do now ;) *grins happily* (which is only fair, because you've made me really like Chromia!)

\o/ YAY! And thankyou :D I have such squee that you like their interactions :D

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onyx17 September 9 2010, 21:57:12 UTC
Oh really? XD Awesomeness! *dances*

And yesh! Interaction win. Every time. Srsly ;p

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ultharkitty September 10 2010, 06:40:25 UTC
Yep :D I'm not generally interested enough in Autobots to find out much about their characterisation, but you've got me really interested in Chromia. I think it's her no-nonsense attitude, her sarcasm, and the way she doesn't take shit from anyone ;)

WHEEEEE! :D

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niyazi_a September 9 2010, 22:22:57 UTC
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSs

Um, yeah. Sorry, not the most coherent crit. I LOVE your Combaticons!

*flail*

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ultharkitty September 10 2010, 06:26:30 UTC
Yay! Thanks for stopping by :D There's plenty more of them to come. (this fic came sooooo close to turning into the Onslaught and Blast Off show)

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mjfastlane September 10 2010, 03:00:14 UTC
Oh god, they're a mess. A very, very fascinating mess. And Starscream actually being halfway competent? Who knew.

And know I want to know what Perceptor has to find a way to do. Wipe his core processor? Or something else?

Suddenly this icon seems relevant for once :P

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ultharkitty September 10 2010, 06:29:51 UTC
Turns out Screamer can be competent when all he needs to do is yell at other people :P

Hehe, I'm so pleased the ambiguity came through on what it is Perceptor is meant to be doing *has squee* :D All will be revealed ;)

Thanks for the feedback :D \o/ (and I love that icon :D )

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mjfastlane September 10 2010, 09:18:18 UTC
Well, he can't be completely hopeless, or he would have been dead by now.

I'm on the edge of my seat now :O

I love this icon too :P

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caiusmajor September 10 2010, 15:02:23 UTC
Yay, Combaticons! I love the interactions here, and I look forward to seeing what Onslaught is plotting.

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ultharkitty September 10 2010, 17:30:55 UTC
Thankyou! :D *is gleeful*

(hopefully Onslaught will amuse :D)

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ultharkitty September 10 2010, 17:31:51 UTC
Hehe, thankyou, I'm glad you like it :D

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