Comments | lost_carcosa: The giftfic arriveth!

ultharkitty in lost_carcosa

The giftfic arriveth!

Dec 20, 2009 17:35

Title: Twister
Setting: G1, just after the end of season 2
Characters/pairings: Blades/Vortex, implied Starscream/Skywarp/Thundercracker, and a supporting cast of several.
Disclaimer: Um... not mine? Just for fun!
Rating: R
Content Advice: slash, storm!kink, plug ‘n’ play, non-con, bondage/S&M, towering egos, violence, porn without much of a plot

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au: dysfunction, swindle, red alert, bumblebee, vortex, smut, dead end, wildrider, continuity: g1, blades, series: twister, optimus

Comments 16

naboru_narluin December 21 2009, 19:07:03 UTC

Okay, I squealed the entire time while reading this fic.
I mean, it’s the first Vortex/Blades fic ever! (at least the first one I read and I searched for them). And it’s so well written and it’s Vortex! He got off from nearly being torn apart by a twister. *hehe*

But one by one:

You know, I actually like Dead End, even if I tend to like killing him equally. *lol*
That’s why I totally begun squealing when he showed up and polished his knuckles. Yay - vanity FTW! *g*

"They're off to go do that thing seekers do in big electrical storms," Dead End explained.
*rofl* I really want to know, what the seekers do in such a storm. :p

And in the middle of the storm:
He stopped his rotors for one glorious moment of free-fall, all the fuel in his tanks thrust giddily upwards, then cut them in again, forcing himself into the heart of the storm.
He’s so lovably insane. *g* Okay, he is sado-masochistic but also lovable. Though, I still don’t want to come near him.

"What! I’m not doing anything, stop saying that!" Blades considered knocking ( ... )

ultharkitty December 21 2009, 21:02:10 UTC

SQUEEE!!!!!!! :D I'm so glad you enjoyed this! :D (also, I slaggin' love that icon - it has just the right amount of OMG WTF? to it for 'copter!smut :P What's he saying, anyway?)

*continues to squee very loudly while being very bouncy*

Thankyou for writing such a long and detailed comment, it's made me very happy indeed! :D And I'm so glad you laughed at the bits that made me giggle uncontrollably while I was writing :P

My lemonade came out of my nose because of my laughing. Did you ever felt fizzy water in your nose? @@ It’s not an appreciating feeling, but at least I didn’t spread it over my screen. :p I made you snort lemonade out of your nose!? OMG, my work here is done I'm sorry! (seriously, you OK? 'Cause I know from experience that it really stings!)

And Bumblebee is a prick. I mean how old is he, that he doesn’t get the hint from Red AND Optimus? ARGH! Hahahahah! Yup, I totally get the impression that Bee's far more interested in satisfying his own curiosity than in doing what he's told (and preventing Spike from being ( ... )

naboru_narluin December 24 2009, 00:24:53 UTC

I honestly did. I already read it again. *lol*
Uhm… I guess Sideswipe tries to say “Chubby Bunny”. *g*

*lol* Didn’t I say when I am really excited I do it a lot. I mean, writing much and nearly quoting the whole fic? ^^°
Oh, that’s the best when the reader laughs at the right scenes. Though I must say I was constantly grinning anyway. Vortex is so crazy. I love, love, love so messed up characters. *___*

Yes, you did. *drop* It was mixed red berries lemonade. <.< *pokes ( ... )

ultharkitty December 24 2009, 00:45:37 UTC

that's where that icon's from! Thanks for the link, that's really funny!

Mmmm, red berries lemonade... Although better in the mouth than up the nose :P

Someone who commented on it on gestalt_love says she's written Blades/Vortex before, so THERE'S MORE OF THIS PAIRING OUT THERE, OMG! This can only be a a good thing. I'm hoping she'll put up some links!

If I am honest, I think Bumblebee is a secret but huge pervert. Hahahahaha! And from now on in, that's canon for this series of fics :P

Oh, Wheeljack totally can! I like that. A lot. Earlier today, I was pondering how Blades would probably try to convince Prime to put Vortex into sensory deprivation, because that would well and truly fuck him over. But Prime is Prime and isn't about to endorse torture. Even if it is our favourite psycopathic helicopter on the receiving end.

Hmmm... as for a fic request... I'm very partial to seeker pileup THOUSANDS OF IT (OK, that phrase is now stuck in my head and won't leave!). Anyway, yeah, a pile of seekers, any which way, any rating ;) And any seekers ( ( ... )

Thread 12

jossversejunky February 26 2010, 08:48:24 UTC

It's all so confusing, the anatomy among other things, but you were right. I'm definitely not the same.

ultharkitty February 26 2010, 09:05:35 UTC

Holy cow, I can't believe you actually read that :D *offers snuggles* It's hellishly confusing if you're not familiar with the cartoon!

But hey, roboporn cherry popped and you came back for more ;) Mwahahahahahahah!

jossversejunky February 26 2010, 09:20:57 UTC

I almost wonder if this is what shell shock feels like. I sat for ten minutes just staring. *accepts the snuggles*

I don't know I'll be reading more. It's too confusing for my simple brain.

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ultharkitty September 8 2010, 06:06:45 UTC

Yay! Glad you like it :D \o/