Fic - Blame

[ultharkitty]

Title: Blame
Continuity: G1 cartoon (Dysfunction AU)
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: implied murder of unnamed OC
Disclaimer: I don’t own the characters, I’m just playing with them
Characters and/or pairings: Vortex, with mention of Megatron, Onslaught, Swindle and Brawl.
Summary: When he first gets put in the Detention Centre, Vortex finds himself

Comments

[naboru_narluin]

I can't believe I haven't read that before... O_O
Gods, this is so awesome, and explaining and all and Vortex and... Awww...

I love the concept, and this line:
Was it the instant they realised that they were no longer in a partner organisation; they were considered a part of the army. Onslaught had been usurped; he was beholden to an idealist.

And the following about rather following Onslaught than Megatron.
Really, really cool! *glomps* :D

[ultharkitty]

Thankyou! :D

I wrote it to try to figure out a little of what went on between the other pre-war stuff in the Dysfunction AU and the Detention Centre. I think I have it a lot more stable in my mind now!

*glomps back* :D

[naboru_narluin]

:D This is really awesome! I'm now so curious what happend there, and why they were imprissoned. :D

[ultharkitty]

I'm planning a long fic to explore that, but I need to do a lot more thinking about the worldbuilding first :D

It's one of the things I utterly love about this fandom - there's so much scope for things like this *has squee*

[naboru_narluin]

I hope you share your thoughts on that fic. ;p

(As for worldbuilding... I write that copter-eating terror fic, and wanted to let it end with V and Ons having a dialogue about Blast Off, that somehow implies that Ons ponders with employing BO, is that okay?)

Yep, it really is. :D

[ultharkitty]

Yep, that sounds fine by me :D

I'll certainly share my thoughts on it with you when I've marshalled them. I tend to do that by writing fic though, so it might take a while!

[naboru_narluin]

Yay, cool. :D To both! *squee* And I can wait, I'm also not that fast. @@