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Dec 30, 2004 17:04


This is a poem i wrote a while back (5/7/04)

He Cut Her Deep

He took his knife,

he cut her deep,

she prayed the lord her soul to keep,

for if she died before the sun did wake,

she knew her soul was his to take,

he whispered nothing in her ear,

she lived with the hate and the fear,

he touched her, not at all,

watch the silver tear drops fall,

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sweet_tragedies December 30 2004, 22:16:11 UTC
To The Next JKR...:)

That could be about two people that I can think of...I remember reading it before though...it was in your journal right? ((the written one, not this one))

Idk...I just remember reading it before.

<3

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loserstimpy69 December 30 2004, 23:48:52 UTC
yeah my written one. I actually wrote it at your house. But yeah, i believe i already explained it to you.
....love....

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sweet_tragedies December 31 2004, 00:24:51 UTC
yea I remember now! woo! kay....

<333

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loserstimpy69 December 31 2004, 04:39:47 UTC
woo!
....love....

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__lovegun December 31 2004, 01:47:42 UTC
i love you.

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loserstimpy69 December 31 2004, 04:40:56 UTC
i love you too. when are we hanging out fuck hole???
....love....

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__lovegun December 31 2004, 22:36:22 UTC
call me. or somthing.

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__lovegun December 31 2004, 22:36:41 UTC
ps.
happy new year. :-/

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catalus913 January 3 2005, 02:51:25 UTC
That is so deep. GOOD JOB!!!! =D

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loserstimpy69 January 4 2005, 03:39:11 UTC
thanks, all my poems are like this one. a few aren't, lol.
thanks.

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as i said... dramaflag_girl January 3 2005, 20:17:44 UTC
As i said before i love this poem. i hope that a certine asshole leaves you alone. i would "HATE" for something bad to happen to him. hope your days is bright.

NICOLE

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Re: as i said... loserstimpy69 January 4 2005, 03:41:48 UTC
Thanks. Yeah it would be great if some people got dropped off the face of the earth, wouldn't it???
....love....

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