Comments | lorie945: Middle Earth Continues Turning, part 4 (F/A NC-17 slash, mpreg)

lorie945

Middle Earth Continues Turning, part 4 (F/A NC-17 slash, mpreg)

Nov 02, 2004 11:03

On a serious day, more soap opera silliness. ( The angst starts here, dear reader )

Comments 18

shirebound November 2 2004, 10:14:02 UTC

This chapter is AMAZING, Lorie! One of your best ever. Such love, and Aragorn's wisdom in leaving Frodo in charge... and Frodo's courage and 'hobbit-sense' wisdom as Steward... and an enemy (gulp)... and further complications!

I'm just in awe of this story. I look forward to every update.

lorie945 November 2 2004, 20:06:42 UTC

Thank you! This story has kind of taken off on its own and gone wild on me. I'm just chasing after it and trying to wrestle a chapter a day into my journal.

abby_normal November 2 2004, 11:05:13 UTC

Okay, this is just too cool. I never would have thought of having Frodo be Steward. It's just awesome and so creative but logical at the same time. And I am seeing a set-up here, what with both of Frodo's most fearsome protectors out of the way and that wanker harboring ill will... Oh, Lorie - I am drooling. No, really!

lorie945 November 2 2004, 20:08:13 UTC

Thanks! It's not me, I think I'm channeling some dead soap opera writer who doesn't want to tell even me what's coming next.

bunnytggr November 2 2004, 11:30:13 UTC

OMG! Poor Frood! The very first line of this fic had me hooked. Oh, I'm so nervous. For Frood, because of the babies and Hope and that ol' nasty opossum-thang sniffing about. For Aragorn, because he's wounded. For Wena, because she'll be worried about Frodo the whole time. *bites nails* Next, please!

Kisses.

lorie945 November 2 2004, 20:09:22 UTC

Poor Frood, and poor Aragorn... there are dark times ahead, but a roller coaster always goes both up and down, right? So hang on, Bunny.

kinkthatwinked November 2 2004, 12:07:20 UTC

Hi, Lorie.

I've NEVER tried reading an m-preg story before, but the last two chapters of this story came up on my LJ and I know you're a great writer, so...

Interesting. I'm not nearly as squicked as I thought I might be. Of course I know nothing of Frodo's ordeal with Hope, and he hasn't given birth to the twins yet. But so far, so good; I love the way you're writing it! Hot pregnant-sex scenes -- all expectant mothers should be so lucky! :)

This Eritor guy is gonna screw with our hero while Wena's away, isn't he? Just enough to make us worry that Frodo will miscarry, right? I hate him already.

lorie945 November 2 2004, 20:12:13 UTC

I'm not certain that this is anything like a "normal" mpreg story -- I'm not someone who does a lot of research on rare diseases that affect the pregnant, so I skip a lot of the medical detail stuff that probably defines the genre.

But if you don't mind Frodo carrying Aragorn's child as a subplot in a wild, implausible AU -- well, you're in exactly the right place! Hop on board and enjoy the ride, and don't slip on the soap bubbles.

trianne November 2 2004, 12:09:46 UTC

Eritor. Watch your back, Frodo. Just saying. *shivers*

Another great chapter, Lorie!

lorie945 November 2 2004, 20:12:54 UTC

How can such a loveable hobbit make so many enemies? *shakes head* Thanks, Trianne!