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What's To Come Is Still Unsure (12/17)

Feb 17, 2010 07:15

Title: What's to Come is still Unsure (11/17)
Author: lorelaisquared
Rating: PG-13
Pairings: TenII/Rose
Word Count: 2311
Beta: The incredible cookie2697
Summary: Part One in an epic love story spanning time and space: When the Doctor abandons Rose in Pete's world with his counterpart, they must learn to live without him. Slowly they build a life together that is ( Read more... )

dwfic, series: shakespeareverse, doctor who, story: what's to come

Comments 17

amyo67 February 17 2010, 15:52:06 UTC

OH No!!

lorelaisquared February 18 2010, 01:41:21 UTC

I KNOW!!!! *hugs*

bookish_brownie February 17 2010, 17:59:10 UTC

Ahhh! What happens next? Can't wait.

lorelaisquared February 18 2010, 01:42:24 UTC

I can't tell you! But I can promise that I won't leave you hanging *too* long.

tempusdominus10 February 17 2010, 18:57:56 UTC

oh shit. KA FARAQ GATRI.

lorelaisquared February 18 2010, 02:59:38 UTC

Come again? Hee. Thanks for reading.

tempusdominus10 February 18 2010, 03:20:42 UTC

Well, for starters, the DOCtor!! He won't be pleased. That's wat I was saying! he hee hee

-evil laugh from Young Frankenstein--

foxyhlc February 18 2010, 00:16:30 UTC

Oh no Viola. Nothing bad can happen to you, you'll break your parents hearts.

Seriously I'm completely sucked into your writing now. I'm reading other fics thinking "where's Viola?"

I adore the image of her flying the TARDIS with her Daddy. The relationship every daughter dreams of.

lorelaisquared February 18 2010, 03:06:07 UTC

Oh no Viola. Nothing bad can happen to you, you'll break your parents hearts. Yes, it's true. They would be devastated.

Seriously I'm completely sucked into your writing now. I'm reading other fics thinking "where's Viola?" awwww thank you. That is one of the nicest things you could have said. :) I'm so glad you are enjoying it so much. Yes, I think there needs to be more stories about Viola. Because of the way this story is written I've kind of zoomed past quite a lot of things so I think I might have to fill in some blanks with some short stories along the way! :)

Isn't that great? I love the idea of Viola and the Doctor flying together too, it's just so beautiful. And you just know she adores her father so she must be so excited. :)

Thanks for reading! :)

earlgreytea68 February 18 2010, 02:53:51 UTC

Okay, everyone's going to discuss the EVIL CLIFFHANGER (yet another!), but I love the "Alice" shout-out.

lorelaisquared February 18 2010, 03:12:09 UTC

LOL "going to?" They already are. And yes, I know it's evil. I even switched things around so that it would be evil (my beta had it split another way) because I'm mean like that... LOL (and really it works better this way from a story telling stand point.)

Alice is wonderful, of course it deserved a shout out ... or several :P