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What's To Come Is Still Unsure (7/16?)

Jan 30, 2010 19:15

Title: What's to Come is still Unsure (7/16?)
Author: lorelaisquared
Rating: PG-13
Characters: TenII, Rose, Jackie
Word Count: 2894
Beta: The incredible cookie2697
Summary: Part One in an epic love story spanning time and space: When the Doctor abandons Rose in Pete's world with his counterpart, they must learn to live without him. Slowly they build a life together ( Read more... )

dwfic, series: shakespeareverse, doctor who, story: what's to come

Comments 28

amyo67 January 31 2010, 03:47:38 UTC

OH, noes. I'm going to cry with them. *hugs Rose and the Doctor*

lorelaisquared January 31 2010, 03:57:32 UTC

*cries with you* I know... *sniff* Poor Rose and the Doctor... But don't worry, I won't keep them unhappy forever... I have my ways of cheering them up!

amyo67 January 31 2010, 03:59:32 UTC

OH YAY!!!!

earlgreytea68 January 31 2010, 03:52:14 UTC

Oh, no! More angst!!

lorelaisquared January 31 2010, 03:58:24 UTC

I know! I am a mean author not letting things be easy for the Doctor and Rose. Don't worry though... I have a plan!

morrighangw January 31 2010, 04:50:17 UTC

Oh, the angst! I can only imagine how agonising this is for the two of them. =(

lorelaisquared January 31 2010, 17:20:05 UTC

*sniff* I know. It's very sad. This was a difficult section to write. Thank you for reading!

bookish_brownie January 31 2010, 05:37:42 UTC

I just finished reading all that you've posted so far, and I really like it. I look forward to more.

lorelaisquared January 31 2010, 17:21:39 UTC

Welcome! Thank you. I'm so glad you found this and are enjoying it.

wiggiemomsi January 31 2010, 06:06:57 UTC

This chapter, especially, really hit home with me; found myself tearing up in memory of what I went through many years ago, trying to get pregnant. It's so very, very painful when you want to have a baby but can't. You portrayed Rose's anguish so realistically!

Now, I betcha that you are going to resolve this issue for the Doctor and Rose, hmmm? Otherwise there might be a reader uprising!

*Hugs*

lorelaisquared January 31 2010, 17:25:17 UTC

*massive hugs* I'm sorry you had to go through something like this. I've never been through this myself but I do want children one day and all I had to do was imagine how I would feel if I found out I couldn't and then to words came. This was a hard one to write though, very emotional. I'm glad you thought I portrayed it realistically. Thank you.

Would I leave Rose and the Doctor miserable? Of course not! I have a plan, I just can't reveal it quite yet. But don't worry, no need for uprising.

*hugs*