What's To Come Is Still Unsure (4/16?)

[lorelaisquared]

Title: What's to Come is still Unsure (4/16?)
Author: lorelaisquared
Rating: PG-13
Characters: TenII, Rose,
Word Count: 2891
Beta: The incredible cookie2697
Summary: Part One in an epic love story spanning time and space: When the Doctor abandons Rose in Pete's world with his counterpart, they must learn to live without him. Slowly they build a life together that is

Comments

[lorelaisquared]

I'm late! I sowwy! I actually read this a lot sooner, but, RL and things, you know. :P *snort* don't appologize. It's TOTALLY fine. I have about 5 stories/vids of yours open and waiting for me in another browser window. Stupid RL has not allowed for time to do much more than editing lately. I'm hoping to get caught up this weekend! Huzzah!

Anyway I swear you are trying to kill us with the fluff! I loved every word of this. Oh, YAY! Thank you. Interestingly, you are one of the few people to comment on the top end of this chapter - most people have been focused on the ending. So thank you - I had quite a lot of fun dreaming up these adventures so I'm glad they were enjoyed!

I almost died laughing when they tried to contain Rose for sneezing, and they had to run. And that was "enough adventuring" LOL! What a far cry from the old days. :D What a doll, he is. *squishes him* LOLOLOL Well, it has been over 5 years since they've done any proper travelling - they're bound to tire more easily.... oh who am I kidding? They just wanted more sexy tiems... (behind the scenes of course, but it happened, oh yes it did, and with some minor arm twisting I *might* be convinced to write about it as a companion piece...)

I was getting a little worried when Rose started to really crave having a child (I'm weird about this issue I admit). I have a feeling it's not left alone, though. IIieee! Let's put it this way - I don't like to be *too* predictable... Just bare with me and I'll explain more later when I can do so without giving anything away....

I so was noticing all the "better" things about this AU universe and all it's planets!! And then ROSE MENTIONED THAT TOO. Haha I felt all clever. xD LOLOLOL YOU GOT INSIDE MY HEAD!!!! LOL You know, that was actually a total accident? I wrote most of that and then cookie2697 and I realized what I'd done and after some discussion I decided to weave it into the story through Rose.

But it made me soooo ridiculously sad that it led up to Gallifrey and it being gone even in that universe... That was just heartbreaking. :( Poor TenToo. And he was all excited. *dabs at eyes with tissues* awwwwwww I know. Poor Doctor. *huggles him*. But it was time for him to grieve. This is an absolutely necessary step for him if he's ever to move forward. IMO anyway...

Anyway this chapter was brilliant, lots of fluff! Can't wait for more. :D DEFINITELY more fluff coming this weekend, I promise! I seem to be settling into a routine of posting on the weekend and mid week. I think it's working so far, so I'll stick with it. :)

THANK YOU for the awesome, detailed comments and of course for reading. I'm delighted that you're enjoying it.