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What's To Come Is Still Unsure (4/16?)

Jan 20, 2010 20:03

Title: What's to Come is still Unsure (4/16?)
Author: lorelaisquared
Rating: PG-13
Characters: TenII, Rose,
Word Count: 2891
Beta: The incredible cookie2697
Summary: Part One in an epic love story spanning time and space: When the Doctor abandons Rose in Pete's world with his counterpart, they must learn to live without him. Slowly they build a life together that is ( Read more... )

dwfic, series: shakespeareverse, doctor who, story: what's to come

Comments 30

amyo67 January 21 2010, 04:32:02 UTC

*huggles the Doctor*

lorelaisquared January 21 2010, 06:19:52 UTC

He needs those hugs :( But don't worry... I promise I won't leave him in despair for long. Gallifrey was one of those things that had to be addressed

rumpelsnorcack January 21 2010, 05:34:53 UTC

:( I'd forgotten all about this chapter. I loved the hope and the joy of everything being 'better' if not perfect. I especially loved the library. Then -- I'd forgotten what happened next. Poor Doctor, he needs a huggle.

lorelaisquared January 21 2010, 06:21:04 UTC

I love the library too. I always wanted to know what it would be like when it was thriving. This way I got to write it! :) Definitely a lot of hope here, and that hope isn't completely gone... we've just hit a little bump in the road is all.

justlook3 January 21 2010, 05:49:42 UTC

Oh poor Doctor, just when everything was going so right!

lorelaisquared January 21 2010, 06:22:02 UTC

I know! *sniff* Poor Doctor. Good thing he's got Rose with him. She's his rock.

sunnytyler001 January 21 2010, 07:55:45 UTC

Awwww. Poor Doctor.
(And Rose wants a baby... *smiles*)

lorelaisquared January 21 2010, 20:14:32 UTC

I know. I just want to hug him. It's so wonderful that he has Rose. :)

And yes, yes she does... *whistles and looks innocent*

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lorelaisquared January 21 2010, 21:31:07 UTC

I think you've really upped the story with this chapter, its amazing. Awww, thank you so much! This really is the turning point in this story where we move from "Earth bound and domestic" Rose and Doctor, to traveling the new universe. Literally ANYTHING can happen.

I'm so glad you like the places he took her to. It was fun trying to come up with ways to make them different in this universe, and the idea of them being "better" just kind of came naturally. He is sort of taking her places she should have been, and places she's already been. I tried to keep a balance.

I also love the bits where Rose wants a baby. I think this is a natural progression from the moment TenII and Rose kiss on the beach. It was always coming to this point...

It does seem to be heading that way, doesn't it...