Forgive Me (1/15)

[lorca_aithne]

This story is fully complete - some 78,000 words. We have broken it up into 15 installments which will post every Monday, Wednesday, and Friday for the next five weeks. This is not the first collaboration that we've posted, but it is the first we wrote! It just takes a lot longer to edit 80k than one might think

Comments

[aylarah_scale]

Can it be Wednesday now please?

I'm really enjoying this so far! Your Harry seems a little "weaker" than I'm used to so far (that's not a criticism), but you do mention his past in the summary and I'm guessing he's been hurt in such a way that his confidence been knocked.

This is also the first Harry/Neville fic I've read, it's weird trying to train my brain to think of Neville as a strong character, even though I know he is and I've read other fics with him in an important role. You've intrigued me enough to give them a chance, and I can't wait to see how their relationship plays out.

Finally, my god have you made me hungry! I love food and have a tendency to google image any dishes mentioned. I want coconut chicken curry so much now! (Or just Indian food in general) Not having any is going to be torture T__T

But yeah, more more more :D

[lorca_aithne]

Thank you so much!

Our Harry has definitely been broken... but we have a feeling Neville will find a way to help him.

If we could give you first-comment coconut chicken curry, we totally would!

<3

[lorca_aithne]

Thank you so much!

We are in LOVE with dom!Neville and hope everyone else is, too!

[aylarah_scale]

Ooh, so you've read other Dom!Neville fics? Who was he paired with? Don't suppose you have any links you'd like to share? I had a brief look for some last night but wasn't very successful :P

[uniquepov]

The Need - http://gypsyflame.livejournal.com/10652.html Nev/Draco

Penchant - http://gypsyflame.livejournal.com/11339.html#cutid1 Nev/Draco plus Nev/Harry/Ron/Draco

Hiding in Plain Sight - http://hp-yule-balls.livejournal.com/73798.html Nev/Draco

A Scholarly Pursuit - http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7220298/1/A_Scholarly_Pursuit Nev/Draco

The Pensieve Project - http://hds-beltane.livejournal.com/100777.html Nev/Draco gen!fic

Just a few of my own faves. =)

[kinky_kneazle]

♥ Love Neville so much! I want one of my own.

[lorca_aithne]

Don't we all, bb?

Thank you for all your help with this! <3

[thepretender501]

I'm very excited about this! I love how Neville is a strong character but still very much Neville and your Harry, something about him makes me just want to hug him tight and never let go. <3 Also the Draco/Hermione thing. I'm very happy about this, I hope they have more parts in the coming chappies. Why isn't it Wednesday, yet? *squirms* Also I really want curry and Indian rice like, right now... *runs into kitchen*

[lorca_aithne]

<3 you bb!

So glad you like it so far!

[secretlypadfoot]

I've been meaning to give this story a read and have just now managed to find the time.

I love the awkwardness, the tentative hand holding and all the thank yous. They really are adorable, aren't they?

[lorca_aithne]

OMG, yes they are! *snuggles them both* Those first date(s) jitters for both of them were rather bad... or good, depending on your point of view. ^_^