Anyone free to Beta?

[loopy777]

The big qualifications: I need the feedback before the 30th, because this is for the White Lotus Exchange. On that note, no one involved in the White Lotus Exchange is allowed. Apparently, it's starts like an anonymous Secret Santa, and the authors aren't revealed until later? So yeah, anyone involved can't know what I wrote until the reveals.

I'm pretty much just looking for proofreading and general feedback to make sure I'm satisfying the prompt correctly. I'll discuss length privately with any volunteers, so just because you see someone volunteering below doesn't mean the job has been filled. Some people might only be free enough to beta a two-page story, which this may or may not be.

Thanks!