Crap Poetry
Since it appears that everyone posts poetry up on their livejournals, I thought I'd follow the trend and add some of my crap too. Not very good, mind you. I kinda like it though, it's pretty old (about a year) and was posted earlier on Deviantart. The poem is actually an excerpt from a story I wrote, but sadly, I doubt that the story will ever see the light of day except for the poem. But who knows. I might someday to get feedback.
Black,
Red,
Black,
Red,
Darkness,
Blood,
Life,
Death,
Couldn't feel,
Couldn't see,
Couldn't hear,
Couldn't think,
She didn't know such pain existed,
Pain where she never felt pain before,
Oh how she longed for death,
Death instead of this hell,
Let him kill me,
Please God, kill me,
Kill me,
Kill me,
Like a mantra going through her head,
She could only think those two words,
And when she thought she had blessedly died,
She was brought back,
Over,
And over,
And over,
Again,
Until all that was left was darkness,
And blood,
Black,
Red
Black,
Red,
Black,
Red,
Darkness,
Blood,
Life,
Death,
Couldn't feel,
Couldn't see,
Couldn't hear,
Couldn't think,
She didn't know such pain existed,
Pain where she never felt pain before,
Oh how she longed for death,
Death instead of this hell,
Let him kill me,
Please God, kill me,
Kill me,
Kill me,
Like a mantra going through her head,
She could only think those two words,
And when she thought she had blessedly died,
She was brought back,
Over,
And over,
And over,
Again,
Until all that was left was darkness,
And blood,
Black,
Red