Feb 24, 2012 09:47
Could I get someone to do a quick skim of the “Ben’s Backstory” chapter when I’ve got it finished? I’m not necessarily looking for canon-picking, because everything’s different. I just want to see if it fits tonally with the LOST-verse, if that makes sense at all.
Also, part of me feels like it’s way OTT, and then part of me feels like if anything it should be worse, and then part of me feels like it’s actually a fairly logical way to alter the original story and I just have a lot of parts and sometimes they don’t get along all that well, so if we could get some kind of tie-breaking vote in here, that’d be great.
(And yes, this was already on tumblr, but I'm starting to get a feel for how fast a dashboard can move as compared to one's f-list, so I thought I'd place it somewhere it wouldn't be buried by gifs of Darren doing interesting things with his tongue.)
(Not that I'm complaining about Darren's tongue.)
(And yes, you are getting Ben backstory. We were gonna have to get there someday, guys.)
help me flist-wan-kenobi,
on writing,
because you left