#9

Jan 16, 2011 20:42

I am cursed today
it was funny for a while
but got old real fast

grab bag, curse: affected, not amused, 5 7 5

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imnotbluffing January 17 2011, 03:16:38 UTC
You have to rhyme and I can't shut up. It's irritating too because normally I'm very quiet and careful what I tell people. My girlfriend--at least I think she's my girlfriend--loves poetry. French usually. I tried to write her a poem once--I did write her a poem once--her French husband was a poet--it was awful. It rhymed but it was awful so I've got sympathy for you.

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lookjustlike January 17 2011, 04:14:14 UTC
Your romantic life
sounds kind of complicated.
Poetry is hard.

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imnotbluffing January 17 2011, 20:10:27 UTC
I think romance is period. I've never had a romantic relationship that wasn't complicated. Have you?

Yeah...it is.

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lookjustlike January 18 2011, 02:14:21 UTC
It's not like I've had
a lot of relationships
mostly just the one.

It's complicated
but for uncommon reasons
and not the gay thing.

Well, maybe that too
but since my life is complex
then all the parts are.

It's hard to explain
especially in haiku,
is this making sense?

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imnotbluffing January 18 2011, 03:54:29 UTC
Yeah. Sort of. I get that the haiku is making it more difficult but basically you confirmed that relationships are complicated. Yours for specific reasons and mine for probably unspecific reasons that everyone deals with.

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lookjustlike January 19 2011, 00:43:51 UTC
That's pretty much it
and that's all I want to say
but need to fill lines.

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