After the service at church this morning I went to a workshop on writing a "Where I'm From" poem.
Here is the original, by the Poet Laureate of Kentucky, George Ella Lyon. The Worship Associates have all written them; there's a sort of rubric, like a Mad Lib, but they tell me that it comes out different each time. You don't have to focus on your childhood. I was interested in this because the Worship Associates have been introducing themselves by reading their poems in the service, and they are all sort of anodyne. I wanted to see if you could write one about an unhappy childhood.
Here's the rubric:
The “Where I’m From” Template
I am from (specific ordinary item)___________________________,
from (two product names)________________________ and________________________.
I am from the _____________________________________________________________ (home description... adjective, adjective, sensory detail).
I am from the ___________________________________________(plant, flower, natural item),
the ___________________________________________________(plant, flower, natural detail).
I am from _______________________________________________________(family tradition)
and _______________________________________________________________(family trait),
from _________________(name of family member) and ______________(another family name)
and ______________________(family name).
I am from the ______________________________________ (description of family tendency) and _____________________________________________________________ (another one).
From __________________________________________ (something you were told as a child) and _________________________________________________________________ (another).
I am from ____________________________________________________________________.
(representation of religion, or lack of it). Further description.
I'm from ____________________________ (place of birth and family ancestry), from
___________________ and ____________________ (two food items representing your family).
From the ________________________________________________________________ (specific family story about a specific person and detail),
the_____________________________________________________________________
(another detail about another family member).
I am from _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.(location of family pictures, mementos, archives and several more lines indicating their worth).
Adapted from George Ella Lyons’s poem “Where I’m From” UUCA/McEmrys/Thompson/Ullius, rev May 24. 2016
But really, you are supposed to write it in a group, because it is as much about revealing yourself to others as about writing poetry. I'll show you mine in the next entry.
Go ahead and show me yours!