get a spark in that head of yours (and don’t let anyone blow it out)

Sep 30, 2008 13:25

get a spark in that head of yours (and don’t let anyone blow it out)
Pete/Ashlee/Brendon; NC-17; 2500 words
Pete grins, his mind forming either million dollar ideas, or disaster

I don't even know where this came from. I sat down with the challenge prompt in front of me, and this is what came out. It's a little fucked up.
Mostly inspired by Pete's ( Read more... )

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bkm5191 October 1 2008, 11:25:47 UTC
this is gorgeous. I love the sense of joy over the whole thing.

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bestthingaround October 1 2008, 19:53:44 UTC
thanks so much. I was going for that :) Glad you liked it.

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feelingcold October 3 2008, 08:03:38 UTC
I really liked this. Thanks.

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bestthingaround October 6 2008, 05:53:31 UTC
you're welcome! Thanks so much for reading, I really appreciate it. :)

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darksylvia October 17 2008, 21:48:29 UTC
Ha, wow. This works way better than I ever would have thought. And I like your Pete POV.

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bestthingaround October 20 2008, 02:23:04 UTC
thanks! It's a bit messed up, but I just love the three of them together. And again, thank you! I really tried to make it feel genuine :)

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ssuukkii October 24 2008, 18:37:24 UTC
dear lord baby jesus: i really liked this.
and it doesn't have anything to do with the fact that pete (who's grown on me, again, thanks to this) spoke beautiful words about my city, and not shit like everybody else. or that you made brendon seem less... gayer in my mind with this.
or that this made me... 'like' ashlee: which is something hard to achieve, i may add.
nah, not at all.
i liked this mainly because it was awesome ;)

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bestthingaround October 25 2008, 20:37:38 UTC
thank you so much for this comment :D
oh, so glad you liked it and the characterization. I found myself liking ashlee after I wrote this, too. Actually, I grew to love all these characters and this pairing so much.
so happy you enjoyed it <3

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runthegamut October 27 2008, 16:35:32 UTC
Okay, so I just wrote out a comment and lj ate it, so let me try again and I hope I don't forget anything.

First off, I obviously fail at reading fic because I missed this completely. I had never read any Pete/Ashlee before I wrote it, so it's probably a combination of that and not being a big reader of Panic fic, so I just skimmed past it without really registering it. But I'm so glad you mentioned it because damn. I don't know why, but I really like the idea of Brendon going down on a woman. Also, the image of Pete fucking Ashlee with his hand on her stomach is HOT. I'm not even sure why that did it so much for me. And thank you for mentioning Pete's jealousy. I think that's a completely normal reaction to a situation like that, no matter how hot he found watching his pregnant wife with another man.

So in summary, yes. ♥

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bestthingaround October 27 2008, 18:07:27 UTC
haha, I totally fail too when it comes to reading fic! I always miss everything. I totally had to open your story in a new tab and go back to it cause of preggo ash, tbh. Glad you came by and gave it a read <3

and nnrrggg yeah, brendon. I knew the story would be a little twisted, but brendon going down on ashlee was too hot to ignore. Pete seems the jealous type, yes? :) And that's why I was so glad you did a pregnant sex fic too, cause it made me feel not so weird about mine. So, anyway, thank you so much ♥

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