Unfinished (With Fear in Your Smile) [4/?]

[longerthanwedo]

Title: Unfinished (With Fear in Your Smile) [4]
Author: longerthanwedo
Beta: melody_so_sweet
Pairing: Brendon/Ryan for now.
Rating: PG-13
POV: 3rd, Brendon centric.
Summary: He’s writing in blood; a feeble attempt to finish the story. The story of his life, of him and him and him. It’s a story of life, of love, of lions and fireworks and years gone by.

Comments

[undermydesk]

What? Am I FC?! :D

Anywho, I haven't commented on this because I just started reading it, but I can truthfully say that I adore each and every word you write.

[longerthanwedo]

You are! And what a wonderful FC it is. Thanks a bunch! :D

[mitchiemarie]

^^
I think this is my favorite chapter.
I love the last line.
gosh bb, your such an awesome writer!
*_*
I'm glad you updated 'cause I was totally procrastinating on my bbb fic
>_<
:P

[longerthanwedo]

Thanks so much bb!!
haha work work work! lol jk, this chapter took me forever, cause i couldn't figure out what was gonna happen to lead up to the cute xD
<3

[mitchiemarie]

^^
your welcome!
:P
too many words!
x-x
D:
but its so totally worth it!
the cute is soo cute!!!

[longerthanwedo]

You can do it!
haha i managed to write 30k in a month, so you should have no problem xD

[pheonix_passion]

Omg I'm suck a girl I made my little omfg dance at the end lol! Amazing :)

[longerthanwedo]

Ahaha glad you liked it :)

[xteam_randyx]

As always, I loved this. This was so adorable!!! I love it!! I especially love the last part. So cute. Love this so much. <3333

[longerthanwedo]

thanks so much!! iu'm glad you like it! :D <3333

[faith_omgwtfbbq]

Jeez, this has continued to amaze me.

It's still so fantastic; I love it.
I've had people over at my house all week, and when I saw this posted yesterday, I couldn't wait to find a time where I could read it.
really fantastic.
can't wait for more, as I've said before<3

[longerthanwedo]

Thank you so much!
Seriously I love your comments, lol.
<3