fic: Time, it Took Us to Where the Water Was

Oct 31, 2011 10:01

Title:  Time, it Took Us to Where the Water Was
Author:  lonewytch
Fandom/Characters:  Doctor Who; Eleven/River
Wordcount: 2730
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Through to the present
Beta and tweaking:  silverlinepark
Summary: Like the storms, their timelines are wrapped and wound round each other, woven intimately, threads of silk cupped into a cocoon. They spiral in onto each other and ( Read more... )

fanfiction, river/eleven fanfic, eleven fanfic

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owlsie October 31 2011, 10:43:23 UTC
This is so sad and lovely, and an excellent portrayal of their relationship. Loved the references to Ceremonials and Abigail's song :]

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lonewytch October 31 2011, 12:03:35 UTC
Thank you hun. I cannot stop listening to Ceremonials at the mo and am a bit obsessed with it, it's such an inspiring album.

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a_phoenixdragon October 31 2011, 13:31:24 UTC
Gorgeous, haunting, lonely, sweet, warm and over too, too soon. Thank you for this, honey...

*SAVES*

Thank you....

*HUGS*

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lonewytch October 31 2011, 14:43:51 UTC
Thank you so much for such a lovely comment darling *big squishy hugs* ♥

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dqbunny October 31 2011, 13:53:29 UTC
This is absolutely gorgeous and plays out like an old epic poem. Oh, damn it, I'm hating the Library for them more and more.

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lonewytch October 31 2011, 14:45:52 UTC
Oooh thank you, i'm glad you liked it. Was going for the poetic feel as it's my first medium.
Yeah, Moffat has to address the Library issue. Not necessarily a complete fix-it where he gets her out, but something...anything. Come on Moff, make it happen!

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youve_got_wings October 31 2011, 15:44:57 UTC
This is so lovely

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lonewytch October 31 2011, 19:27:13 UTC
Glad you liked it; thanks for reading ♥

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nonelvis October 31 2011, 21:47:51 UTC
This is beautifully written. There were so many gorgeous turns of phrase, but I think this is my favorite: Its cover begins to fade and becomes the blue of a bruised and weary sky.

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lonewytch October 31 2011, 22:05:21 UTC
Thank you very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, thanks so much for reading x

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