fic: Set Your Life On Fire

[lonewytch]

Title:  Set Your Life On Fire
Author: lonewytch
Rating: Teen
Pairing/Characters: River/11
Wordcount: 8723
Summary: River causes trouble again. The Doctor is unamused.

Written for the spoiler_song River/11 ficathon. Title from Rumi. For scandalbaby and the prompt: She's a firecracker, a troublemaker, and I can't imagine my world without her. This fic was never meant to be this long, but

Comments

[gidget_zb]

Aww very nice :) I loved the planet - I am so terrible at world-building in fics, and I so love it when others do it well :)

[lonewytch]

Aw thank you so much, that's such a lovely compliment. I always worry about my world building ability so i'm really glad to hear you enjoyed it :)

[a_phoenixdragon]

Gorgeous...so, so beautiful!! And omg, yay!! You did it, you did it!! Peace treaty - done! River learning a lesson - done! The DOCTOR learning a lesson - done! Quiet planet, but still with an adventure hinted at - done!

GUH and hawt and flustered and sexy...done, done, done and done!!!

AWESOME, bb!! Just fabulous!!

*DANCES*

[lonewytch]

Aw thank you so much darling, i'm so glad you enjoyed the finished product! Yup, they both had to learn that lesson, but then that's the beauty of these 2 in-show *wistful sigh*

Thank you for your help with the names of the 2 alien races! I know who to call on again when i need some more weird and wonderful names. And also thanks for help with the cheerleading and telling me i could get it done. i began to wonder if it would ever end!!!

I'm glad it was sexy. Hell, they soooo needed to have angry!sex just after getting in the Tardis, but i reigned myself in to leave it unspoken at the end!

Thank you loads honey

[a_phoenixdragon]

Right?! Gods...perfection, sweetie!

Ahhh, didn't hardly do anything to help the last month. I've been a bad friend *kicks self* the least I could do was come up with names for you. And I'd be happy to do so again! And sweetie, I just knew you'd have it done and perfect. You and your Musie couldn't do it any other way - and this? This is proof!

Mmmmmm...River being cuffed and spanked. Oh my!! REALLY need to write that for you. Oncoming!Storm!Eleven and sexy shenanigans in the console room. GUH. *Ahem* Sorry...

Thank YOU for putting up with my lack of...welll...everything!

*Snuggles you*

[lonewytch]

You've not been a bad friend darling, you've had a lot going on!

Mmmmm...yes you do need to write that for me as soon as your Muse gets working and is in the mood. I shall look forward to that!

Ah honey, there is no "putting up". You're my friend and i'm here for you whatever's going on, no judgement about what you are or aren't doing.

*cuddles close*

[dqbunny]

Oh, I love this fic - how it all tied in together in the end, the lovely character introspection, the new planet, the adventure, etc. This was just beautiful.

[lonewytch]

Aw, thank you sweetie, i'm so glad you enjoyed! I knew i wanted to kinda have it come full circle at the end right from the start but it took me a little while to figure out how!

[easytheretyger]

I love this:

“Stupid,“ she had cut over him loudly. “I mean, this planet. It’s crap. You’ve already ruined over fifty percent of the surface with chemical weapons, and let’s face it, even before you started arguing over it, it wouldn’t have been that great anyway. And now - now - arguing about it is beyond idiotic, it’s a few hundred years away from being annihilated by that.” She had gestured vaguely above her head, towards a gnarled and sagging ceiling. “ It’s going to gobble up this little rock, and it will be as if it had never existed. So this whole thing, you see. Utterly pointless. Honestly, bloody men…”

She just says exactly what she thinks. :)

[lonewytch]

I have to admit that i was laughing to myself as i wrote that particular passage!!

[welshred]

Gorgeous. I loved the imagery of the pretty planet and how you showed young River's more reckless side.

[lonewytch]

Thank you so much, i'm so glad you enjoyed. I love writing younger River, she's so much fun!