fic: Bedside Manner (NC-17, 1/1)

[lone_pyramid]

TITLE: Bedside Manner

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[miera_c]

*GLEE*

Whatever he looks like, whatever might happen, right here and right now he's still her John.

*even more glee*

:)

[lone_pyramid]

Four hours of editing, omg. GLEE IS GOOD!!!!!

And thank you again!

[shayz]

Wow. Good job. Hot and angsty. Vulnerable but dangerous John is so yumming.

[lone_pyramid]

Totally agree. Although any kind of John is yummy. *g*

Thanks so much!

[the_scary_kitty]

GUH!

I love Bug!John. No, I LUST for Bug!John. He's so vulnerable and needy and freaked out and totally over the edge. Damn, but he's hot.

And Elizabeth is just fraking awesome for not giving a damn about what he looks like, she just wants to see him... GUH!

*melts into a puddle of goo*

[lone_pyramid]

Apparently there is a whole group that is totally into Bug!John. I'm mostly just into Conversion because the Sparky!loyalty!omg!! Canon evidence that Elizabeth would, indeed, sit by John's bedside when he's seriously injured. We win at fandom!

Thank you very much! And also thank you for letting me have this ep when we sorting those conflicts out -- I'd had this idea for a month or so but I probably wouldn't have written it without the "excuse" of the ficathon. ;)

[the_scary_kitty]

Bug!John + Sparky = Universal Domination. We so win at fandom. Because, well, canon sucks. ;P

And you're very welcome! Honestly, as much as I would've loved to have done this episode myself, I'm waaaay too intimidated by the other fantastic Conversion fics I've read. And this one has definitely joined that list! :)

[lone_pyramid]

Bug!John + Sparky = Universal Domination. We so win at fandom. Because, well, canon sucks. ;P

Amen. All on fronts.

And no rule says we can't write other eps after all's said and done.... ;)

[quietlybemused]

You had me at "slightly kinky sex" and the rest was just icing on the cake. *g*

I love how your smut seems realistic; as in, you wrote it in such a way that it didn't seem out of place in that time frame.

Oh, and also, it was hot!

[lone_pyramid]

Ah, so next time I can just skip the actual fic and write "kinky sex" as a post?

Thank you, m'dear!

[quietlybemused]

That would do it. ;)

[lone_pyramid]

I'm going to do that one day, just to see what sort of reaction I get. Mostly it will be along the lines of, "Bwuh?"

[anuna_81]

*sigh*

Who told you you're not good at smut? That person is terribly wrong! Especially if it's you telling yourself you're not good at it. This was great.

My favorite thing about this story is not - perfect sex, and the fact they are awkward around each other, he is desperately trying to hide his changing and she is struggling to deal with it somehow. And it's so hot on top everything else.

*sighs again*

Thank you for another amazing story.

[lone_pyramid]

Ah, the "I suck at smut!" thing is all me. We all have our insecurities, and this is mine. But it doesn't stop me from writing it anyway so obviously it's not debilitating. *g*

Thanks so much for the kind words! I'm very glad you enjoyed the fic. :D

[anuna_81]

Yes, I know about insecurities, I have them too. I guess they do serve some purpose?

Just keep writing. Most important thing about it is having fun ;)