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smirkingcat October 26 2015, 20:30:44 UTC
this chapter was intense on many levels
not only vira and her wish
but also the not knowing whats going on part
and then you top it off with draco telling them about his mother
WOW just WOW
but in the end, this episode also clamed down dracos fears and makes him trust harry more
and that is very beautiful and touching!
great work!

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lomonaaeren October 28 2015, 02:50:07 UTC
Thank you so much! I didn't know what was going to happen with Vira until I was actually writing it, but I'm glad you liked it.

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rjaejoo October 26 2015, 21:03:18 UTC

This was a twist I w as set expecting.  It's kind of fascinating and I like how you have led it back to Draco's own issue.

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lomonaaeren October 28 2015, 02:50:28 UTC
Thank you!

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piratesmile331 October 26 2015, 22:21:56 UTC
But now he knew what someone looked like who was sick for their heart’s desire and willing to risk everything to leave everything else behind. It wasn’t the way Harry’s eyes lingered on him, or his arm around Draco’s waist.
So glad that Draco's trust in Harry is growing!

Also, those dragon-keepers are lucky they didn't get hexed.

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lomonaaeren October 28 2015, 02:51:09 UTC
Well, the dragon-keepers were probably in more danger of getting fried by the Ironbelly that landed in the forest. Probably.

(I adore your icon).

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lomonaaeren October 28 2015, 02:51:32 UTC
Thanks! Yes, I think more countries than just Britain would have that problem, at least if some of the same attitudes to Muggleborns exist in them.

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enchanted_jae October 28 2015, 01:33:22 UTC
Wow, that was stunning, especially for Draco's epiphany at the end.

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lomonaaeren October 28 2015, 02:51:49 UTC
Thank you! I really liked this chapter, so it makes me happy that other people like it too. :)

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