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helenadax September 23 2014, 23:31:53 UTC
Wow, that was intense! I love that Harry "feels" Draco as part of the pack, now. And it was great to see things from the wolf pov.

And Umbridge's plan? Did she think Harry would attack or even kill Draco? Anyway, she deserves whatever happens to her now.

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lomonaaeren September 26 2014, 22:33:14 UTC
Thank you!

Since it'll come out in the next chapter: Yes, she did intend to have Draco die. She thought he was betraying them the minute she saw the way he was walking next to Harry, and while she brought along the artifact for other reasons, she thought it would be amusing if Harry killed the "traitor" when he was in wolf form.

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vengence_on_ice September 24 2014, 00:22:46 UTC
Ohh, now I wanna know why! Excellent plot twist with Umbridge using the thing against Harry. Very unexpected, and Draco's pack status, too.

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lomonaaeren September 26 2014, 22:33:39 UTC
Thank you!

Draco is trying to tell himself that his pack status isn't all that unexpected, but he's still a little shaky from the attack and the reason he survived it.

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lijahlover September 24 2014, 17:29:57 UTC
I loved the way Draco can calm Harry down. I also love how Harry looks at Draco as one of the pack.

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lomonaaeren September 26 2014, 22:33:46 UTC
Thank you!

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lomonaaeren September 26 2014, 22:34:20 UTC
Thank you!

Of course that's the kind of words the wolf understands. The most inconvenient ones, from context. :)

Harry does not intend to keep Umbridge in his pack. He's going to exercise more magic to make sure they don't have to.

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smirkingcat October 2 2014, 13:28:04 UTC
uhhhh i like it - all of it
like a pack malfoy even accepted by the wolf and he held his ground against the wolf too- the angst was totally ok and awesome to read about, and the best part is a beasty umbridge, thats just sugar icing to the whole cake!!!
and now harry can command her- i like that line a lot, it felt very powerful

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