I loved it! It was an amazing story and I hope you write more because they are all very intriguing.
I think you portray Draco and Harry terrifically, better than many writer who make them..weak? Yes, weak, you give them this-strength that doesn't leave them, even when they are "hopelessly" in love. Breathtaking!
This was a good one! I really like your stories that allude to the possible darkness in Harry. Tapping into canon and his connection with Voldemort and his, affinity for dark magic it seems logicial that he would be "tainted" or tourched in some way and leave it to Draco to see the influence of dark magic and its impact on Harry.
As far as Hermoine's judgment of Harry, I understand her concerns but I thought Draco's point that if the healers had tormented the children without knowing why -- that somehow makes the torment worse. Not that having a reason makes it better or excuses it, but at least you understand the reasons behind it. Done in a vacuum? Ewww. Anyway,
"This he had simply gained. . ."
I guess it is true. Life is what happens when we are busy making other plans.
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Again, another lovely story!
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I think you portray Draco and Harry terrifically, better than many writer who make them..weak? Yes, weak, you give them this-strength that doesn't leave them, even when they are "hopelessly" in love. Breathtaking!
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But what a gorgeous ending!
But this he had not imagined. This, he had not planned for.
This, he had simply gained.
^That, my friend, is beautiful! I don't think I could envisioned a better way to conclude this story if I tried.
Thank you for writing it and sharing it with us!
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As far as Hermoine's judgment of Harry, I understand her concerns but I thought Draco's point that if the healers had tormented the children without knowing why -- that somehow makes the torment worse. Not that having a reason makes it better or excuses it, but at least you understand the reasons behind it. Done in a vacuum? Ewww. Anyway,
"This he had simply gained. . ."
I guess it is true. Life is what happens when we are busy making other plans.
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