Lucius and Narcissa! ^^ Although in this fic they aren't good for Draco, I'm always happy to see them. The fact that Lucius wants Draco far from Harry makes me think that Harry's in danger and Lucius knows why.
Is it sure that Harry was hallucinating? At the beginning, I thought Nancy was real and she had disappeared, but Harry doesn't seem to think that's even an option.
I didn't like Macgeorge, she was rude for no reason.
Well, there may be other reasons. But I think Harry is always in danger, from his job and his fame, so it would take more than that for Lucius to convince Draco.
Harry and Draco come up with a probable explanation in the next chapter.
I don't think Macgeorge expressed it in the best way, but I do think that she has a legitimate concern about how Harry and Draco's reputation affects the rest of the Socrates Corps.
I don't like the way that Harry responded to Macgeorge at the end of their conversation. I don't see what he has to apologize for to Draco, that Draco didn't do as well during the argument. I don't see how Draco is any less of a risk-taker or rule breaker (maybe he's better at not getting caught). With the whole banned from the hospital which is supposed to be proof of Harry's recklessness, I feel like it's pretty seriously fuked up to hold someone in a psych ward just because they want to leave earlier than the healers recommend. I feel like that's probably a crime. And I think escaping from that situation was necessary for Harry, though he should have been honest about his vision with Draco. I love your stories, but I really hate the way that you make some of your characters lecture Harry sometimes. You write him wonderfully, and I agree that there are things that he does that others would find alarming, and that they might see as Harry acting self-destructive. But the way that some of these characters respond to him like Macgeorge
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Is it sure that Harry was hallucinating? At the beginning, I thought Nancy was real and she had disappeared, but Harry doesn't seem to think that's even an option.
I didn't like Macgeorge, she was rude for no reason.
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Harry and Draco come up with a probable explanation in the next chapter.
I don't think Macgeorge expressed it in the best way, but I do think that she has a legitimate concern about how Harry and Draco's reputation affects the rest of the Socrates Corps.
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