Comments | lomonaaeren: Chapter Twenty-Seven of 'Practicing Liars'- Break the Circle

lomonaaeren

Chapter Twenty-Seven of 'Practicing Liars'- Break the Circle

Dec 29, 2009 14:21

practicing liars, action/adventure, pov: multiple, novel-length, harry/draco, angst, set at hogwarts, drama, preslash, au, rated r or nc-17, ron/hermione

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groolover December 29 2009, 19:33:25 UTC

Things are looking up! I love the way you brought Eileen Prince into it. But Harry squeezing Draco's hand was my highlight.

lomonaaeren January 2 2010, 03:57:43 UTC

Thank you!

firedraygon97 December 29 2009, 20:41:33 UTC

I'm glad you rationalize how irrational Harry was behaving earlier. Not all of it is due to the bloodline curse, but it's a good way to explain the sheer extremes of paranoia Harry was experiencing. I like how Snape barely thought it through before coming to Harry's rescue. His attitude is definitely changing. Great work!

hitsuzen_hime December 30 2009, 02:31:57 UTC

Agreed. Harry was starting to go totally off the deep end and it's good to have an explanation for why, my sympathy was beginning to be outweighed by frustration and you cut that off nicely.

lomonaaeren January 2 2010, 03:58:53 UTC

Thanks! I was trying to convey in Chapter 26 that most of Harry's illogic was due to the curse, but I don't know how well that came across.

lomonaaeren January 2 2010, 03:58:32 UTC

Thank you!

The bloodline curse is about the worst one that could be cast on Harry, since he was already afraid of betraying his secrets. Suddenly he thinks that everyone is going to take them away from him. Of course he got paranoid.

gothatheartholo December 29 2009, 20:49:32 UTC

Seriously, this chapter just brings tears to my eyes.

/sniffles/

<3

lomonaaeren January 2 2010, 03:59:02 UTC

Thank you!

star_faerie December 29 2009, 20:59:36 UTC

That was an brilliant chapter with an interesting revelation. I look forward to seeing if Harry can keep his word.

lomonaaeren January 2 2010, 03:59:22 UTC

Thanks!

He won't keep it all the time. But he'll come much closer to keeping it permanently than he used to.

jtsbbsps_dk December 29 2009, 21:14:30 UTC

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I love you. So hard.

When I saw the chapter title I was all like *relieved breath* :D

And Severus just handled everything perfectly! ♥
And the moment with Draco here at the end. LOVE! ♥

I have mentioned I love this story, right? *giggles*

lomonaaeren January 2 2010, 03:59:46 UTC

Thank you!

Yeah, this chapter is definitely meant as the turning point in the circle, if you'll excuse the pun, and the point where the characters (mostly) escape it.