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franalan August 23 2009, 14:08:10 UTC
Wow! I really want to know what the spells were....

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lomonaaeren August 24 2009, 00:33:03 UTC
Thank you! The nature of the spells is explained in a later chapter.

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la_mariane August 23 2009, 14:35:31 UTC
Thanks for the new chapter!
I really enjoy Draco's POV and how his and Harry's relationship evolve.
And I'm really curious about the magic that attacked them.

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lomonaaeren August 24 2009, 00:33:36 UTC
You're welcome!

For the moment, Draco's POV will be the most insightful one, especially given that Harry is so prone to ignoring what's going on around him.

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hogwartshoney August 23 2009, 15:42:49 UTC
Christ, I love this story!

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lomonaaeren August 24 2009, 00:33:43 UTC
Thank you!

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anonymous August 23 2009, 15:54:08 UTC
Yikes, the ribbon-magic-of-doom attacks! Scary stuff. Glad the two boys overcame it.
Harry and Draco's relationship seems to be developing very realistically. Kudos to Draco for looking for a sexual aspect to Harry's staring problem. At least he hasn't dismissed the notion out of hand, the way I suspect Harry would. Also glad to see Draco so determined to keep his current understanding with Harry. Can't wait for Ron-feels-left-out-round-2. Ought to be...tense.
Must say, I foresee Harry getting up from staring at the table leg, bashing his head against the underside, and manage to notice the Pensieve in the process. Not only would it let the two explore the memories together, it just seems like a Harry thing to do. Then again, I'm a fan of haphazard Harry. :)
Always looking forward to future updates!
-Jolene

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lomonaaeren August 24 2009, 00:35:14 UTC
Thank you!

Draco wouldn't really dismiss the sexual aspect out of hand, because it might be there. On the other hand, at the moment he's thinking of it as something to exploit, because he really has no notion of becoming Harry's lover.

Things between Ron and Harry become more tense for a while. They need to have an out-and-out fight before they can really reestablish their equilibrium.

Thanks for commenting.

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hpstrangelove August 23 2009, 15:54:33 UTC
Great update! I'm glad I had the time to read it right away and leave a comment. I'm doing my best to keep up with your fics, but this one is my overall favorite right now. I like the way you're developing their relationship, and I love a good mystery too.

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lomonaaeren August 24 2009, 00:35:35 UTC
Thank you!

Hey, you're doing well to keep up. I haven't done at all as good a job of keeping up with comments in the last few weeks as I should have.

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