Comments | lomonaaeren: Part Four of 'The Long-Desired'

lomonaaeren

Part Four of 'The Long-Desired'

Jul 19, 2009 09:19

the two hunters series, the long-desired, angst, creature!fic, rated r or nc-17, horror, chaptered novella, romance, ewe, dual pov: draco and harry

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franalan July 19 2009, 13:48:49 UTC

Oh Draco! I hope he wasn't too late!

laila2605 July 20 2009, 10:22:35 UTC

Well. I hope he is too late

franalan July 20 2009, 10:33:14 UTC

Meanie! *cries*

lomonaaeren July 21 2009, 19:58:53 UTC

Well, too late to keep something from happening, though it may not be the end of the bond.

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lomonaaeren July 21 2009, 19:59:02 UTC

Thank you!

la_mariane July 19 2009, 13:59:01 UTC

I really enjoy this story, especially the dual POV.
In the comments I read (the ones for the previous chapters), it seems that most readers sympathize with Draco, but I can really understand Harry. Even if his opinion is biased (he IS obsessed with hunting vampires), he just feels he has to defend his freedom and no one will help him. And the Long-Desired bond doesn't sound so nice...But it's true he's forgotten all his other principles (or the ones canon-Harry has) if he doesn't mind using dark rituals.
I liked your idea about a class of magic even more taboo than the Unforgivables. It makes sense that something that can change human nature would fall in that category. And it fits with canon perfectly : the Ministry would not hesitate to destroy books and Obliviate people if they felt justified in doing so.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

lomonaaeren July 21 2009, 20:00:42 UTC

Thank you!

This, I think, is where Harry really does go too far. It's understandable for him to want his freedom and try to reject Draco, as well as finding alternatives, but hurting an animal is beyond the pale and meant to seem so.

The Ministry bans and controls and keeps secret a lot of things. It made sense to me that there is worse magic than magic that kills, tortures, or controls the mind out there.

ura_hd July 19 2009, 16:24:16 UTC

The bond seems to be sentential. Kind of weird. Nice chapter!

lomonaaeren July 21 2009, 20:00:53 UTC

It is, in a way. Thank you!

jtsbbsps_dk July 19 2009, 20:01:34 UTC

FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK!
Can you say: OMG, cliffhanger!!!!
ARGH! *dies*
Harry is going to be SO PISSED!
Next chapter soon, please, pretty please??!

lomonaaeren July 21 2009, 20:01:07 UTC

The next chapter should be up in a few days.

jtsbbsps_dk July 21 2009, 20:02:38 UTC

Thanks! I just hope it's before Saturday, because I'm going on vacation for a week ^_^

lomonaaeren July 21 2009, 20:06:01 UTC

It should be on Thursday. :)

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