Monologues always tempt me to turn them into run-on sentences, which are not always as expressive as the author thinks they are. :) So, yay! I'm glad you liked it.
Thanks! I think my characters do tend to be emotional more often than is strictly appropriate for their gender, but poor Draco has chased Harry around for most of the story; it was about time for Harry to make an unmistakable statement.
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Well, it is, but otherwise, he would have found some way to deny or excuse what Draco was saying.
And thanks!
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I especially love Harry's monologue when he admits his feelings... it's very expressive :D:D
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Monologues always tempt me to turn them into run-on sentences, which are not always as expressive as the author thinks they are. :) So, yay! I'm glad you liked it.
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